Lethal Lyricist League: Smog (1-0) vs Enbombz(1-0) (sMOG Wins)

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

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[Enbombz]

check

[Smog]

Lets go ten..

[Smog]

Lethal? No, Lyricist? Pffft... Only a few here can step wit a challenge
So if u n this league got 1 thing in common.. It's ur both fuckin desperate fa talent
Sour hit u in the chest n left u breathless, got u talkin them gunz now
I mean ur prolly just dyin to smoke cig.. Since he left u coughing ur lungs out..
U made it deep in the 1-2 n key, then faced comp n got bullied up, bruh
So it's fitting that after those SEMI beatings.. Ur facin me to get Fully fucked up
Since this Sites been Slow u champed some cyphers, but ur barz don't got venom
S'just that pickin u to win was a no brainier... Duuh, ur like the only 1 that dropped in um
N Ur wifey ain't faithful,soon as u head to work I'm showin up ta bone
I can't help it dawg, cuz a soon as Bombs Away the bitch keeps Blowin up my phone

[Enbombz]

[QUOTE=Enbombz]

@Smog if u hadn't noticed I enjoy being a prick

an I'm 5'10, 170

http://33.media.tumblr.com/4395c6217...1l6eo1_500.gif

I ain't playin In the race for the crown so we won't see you in it
Cos in this Game of Thrones you even get bullied by Rb's Peter Dinklage
Always at war like the shores on d-day that's my triggers stance,
Dropping smog dead body' in the sand niggas, thats an Azalea Twitter rant,
I'm wit his wifey while he work, got me thinking this one mad coincidence
...Vibing to bands on the roadie don't know she busy handling my instrument,
Rb's nearly man cos u still clearly wack, all ya shit is minor
S'why Only time we seeing smog on a top 5 list is reasons not to visit China,
All the times I've seen you cooked n bloodied makes me Wonder buddy
Why You think you as good Ronin 47 losses says ya more of an understudy!

[Fresh]

Lethal? No, Lyricist? Pffft... Only a few here can step wit a challenge
So if u n this league got 1 thing in common.. It's ur both fuckin desperate fa talent
This was decent
Sour hit u in the chest n left u breathless, got u talkin them gunz now
I mean ur prolly just dyin to smoke cig.. Since he left u coughing ur lungs out..
cool
U made it deep in the 1-2 n key, then faced comp n got bullied up, bruh
So it's fitting that after those SEMI beatings.. Ur facin me to get Fully fucked up
I get the correlation it just seems underwhelming
Since this Sites been Slow u champed some cyphers, but ur barz don't got venom
S'just that pickin u to win was a no brainier... Duuh, ur like the only 1 that dropped in um
lol aight
N Ur wifey ain't faithful,soon as u head to work I'm showin up ta bone
I can't help it dawg, cuz a soon as Bombs Away the bitch keeps Blowin up my phone
feelin it

vs

I ain't playin In the race for the crown so we won't see you in it
Cos in this Game of Thrones you even get bullied by Rb's Peter Dinklage
aight
Always at war like the shores on d-day that's my triggers stance,
Dropping smog dead body' in the sand niggas, thats an Azalea Twitter rant,
not a fan
I'm wit his wifey while he work, got me thinking this one mad coincidence
...Vibing to bands on the roadie don't know she busy handling my instrument,
this was okay
Rb's nearly man cos u still clearly wack, all ya shit is minor
S'why Only time we seeing smog on a top 5 list is reasons not to visit China,
lol aight
All the times I've seen you cooked n bloodied makes me Wonder buddy
Why You think you as good Ronin 47 losses says ya more of an understudy!
don't like this

Cool battle.. Smog came with a little more heat though. He only had one bar I didn't really like. Enbombz had 2 I didn't like.

v/ Smog

[A. Diction]

Lethal? No, Lyricist? Pffft... Only a few here can step wit a challenge
So if u n this league got 1 thing in common.. It's ur both fuckin desperate fa talent
--- ehh this has been done before and done every which way, really. Not a miss just makes it light cuz of that........
Sour hit u in the chest n left u breathless, got u talkin them gunz now
I mean ur prolly just dyin to smoke cig.. Since he left u coughing ur lungs out..
--- been done............
U made it deep in the 1-2 n key, then faced comp n got bullied up, bruh
So it's fitting that after those SEMI beatings.. Ur facin me to get Fully fucked up
--- dope. The flip wasn't what I was expecting..........
Since this Sites been Slow u champed some cyphers, but ur barz don't got venom
S'just that pickin u to win was a no brainier... Duuh, ur like the only 1 that dropped in um
--- lmao....aite.......
N Ur wifey ain't faithful,soon as u head to work I'm showin up ta bone
I can't help it dawg, cuz a soon as Bombs Away the bitch keeps Blowin up my phone
--- been done. Smooth wording tho.........


Vs


I ain't playin In the race for the crown so we won't see you in it
Cos in this Game of Thrones you even get bullied by Rb's Peter Dinklage
--- lol okay............
Always at war like the shores on d-day that's my triggers stance,
Dropping smog dead body' in the sand niggas, thats an Azalea Twitter rant,
--- I don't keep up with Iggy's twitter shit so this is over my head...........
I'm wit his wifey while he work, got me thinking this one mad coincidence
...Vibing to bands on the roadie don't know she busy handling my instrument,
--- simple but I like...........
Rb's nearly man cos u still clearly wack, all ya shit is minor
S'why Only time we seeing smog on a top 5 list is reasons not to visit China,
--- feels played but I haven't seen it so I gotta give u props.........
All the times I've seen you cooked n bloodied makes me Wonder buddy
Why You think you as good as Ronin 47 losses says ya more of an understudy!
--- fire.........



Overall: smog had two heavy hitters but he had some played shit too that hurt his verse. Enbombz was consistent with only one miss, and that might not even be a miss I'm just not up on pop culture lol. I gotta go with enbombz here though I think he stepped up and put out a quality verses.



V. Enbombz

[Unfukwitable]

Lethal? No, Lyricist? Pffft... Only a few here can step wit a challenge
So if u n this league got 1 thing in common.. It's ur both fuckin desperate fa talent
Since this Sites been Slow u champed some cyphers, but ur barz don't got venom
S'just that pickin u to win was a no brainier... Duuh, ur like the only 1 that dropped in um
N Ur wifey ain't faithful,soon as u head to work I'm showin up ta bone
I can't help it dawg, cuz a soon as Bombs Away the bitch keeps Blowin up my phone


vs.

Rb's nearly man cos u still clearly wack, all ya shit is minor
S'why Only time we seeing smog on a top 5 list is reasons not to visit China,
All the times I've seen you cooked n bloodied makes me Wonder buddy
Why You think you as good Ronin 47 losses says ya more of an understudy!


this was a good battle I feel one had a shaky start impact wise conceputually he was on point but the hits just wasnt stingin like the closers the other had some mild bars but the personals we're worded cool and his closer was dope to me even thos it's 3 quotes to 2 it's slightly closer in my head but one still had the edge. v/Smog

[Letterman]

Lethal? No, Lyricist? Pffft... Only a few here can step wit a challenge
So if u n this league got 1 thing in common.. It's ur both fuckin desperate fa talent
Sour hit u in the chest n left u breathless, got u talkin them gunz now
I mean ur prolly just dyin to smoke cig.. Since he left u coughing ur lungs out..
N Ur wifey ain't faithful,soon as u head to work I'm showin up ta bone
I can't help it dawg, cuz a soon as Bombs Away the bitch keeps Blowin up my phone

Vs

coincidence
...Vibing to bands on the roadie don't know she busy handling my instrument,
Rb's nearly man cos u still clearly wack, all ya shit is minor
S'why Only time we seeing smog on a top 5 list is reasons not to visit China,

This battle was decent. Smog was much better IMO. Aside from those two from Bombz, wasn't really feeling any of his other bars. Smog had one that was almost a hit, the semi one. He had the better verse overall.

v/Smog

[Kenny the OG]

Lethal? No, Lyricist? Pffft... Only a few here can step wit a challenge 
So if u n this league got 1 thing in common.. It's ur both fuckin desperate fa talent
pretty straightforward personal
Sour hit u in the chest n left u breathless, got u talkin them gunz now
I mean ur prolly just dyin to smoke cig.. Since he left u coughing ur lungs out..
I appreciate personals ina verse, but the smoking cig concept is way too easy. The connections been done alot but the fact that it's a personal gives it some actual depth
U made it deep in the 1-2 n key, then faced comp n got bullied up, bruh 
So it's fitting that after those SEMI beatings.. Ur facin me to get Fully fucked up 
Cool
Since this Sites been Slow u champed some cyphers, but ur barz don't got venom 
S'just that pickin u to win was a no brainier... Duuh, ur like the only 1 that dropped in um
straightforward personal
N Ur wifey ain't faithful,soon as u head to work I'm showin up ta bone 
I can't help it dawg, cuz a soon as Bombs Away the bitch keeps Blowin up my phone
Fiiiire. What else!


I ain't playin In the race for the crown so we won't see you in it
Cos in this Game of Thrones you even get bullied by Rb's Peter Dinklage
Smooth wording and relevant setup/bar connection. But the punch is lost on me bc I don't watch that show.
Always at war like the shores on d-day that's my triggers stance,
Dropping smog dead body' in the sand niggas, thats an Azalea Twitter rant,
Too each his own but for me personally this bar was way to wordy. Coulda been tightened up to maximize it's sting. The concept was ehhh but the wording didn't help it either
I'm wit his wifey while he work, got me thinking this one mad coincidence 
...Vibing to bands on the roadie don't know she busy handling my instrument,
Not feelin this
Rb's nearly man cos u still clearly wack, all ya shit is minor
S'why Only time we seeing smog on a top 5 list is reasons not to visit China,
fiiiire. Keep going!!
All the times I've seen you cooked n bloodied makes me Wonder buddy
Why You think you as good Ronin 47 losses says ya more of an understudy!
I get it. The personal attack was ok. The wording was weird tho

Close battle. Both were pretty inconsistent in imo with wording issues. But it's all a matter of preference so this can go either way. I think they had one quotable a piece. Smogs closer was dope and so was bombs top 5 bar. When it's this close I pick a winner based on who had the stronger quotables, and in this rare case I can't even decide one over the other ha! ..y'all need more bars like those.

In the end smogs misses weren't as bad as bombs.
Vote- smog

[KnowP]

Sour hit u in the chest n left u breathless, got u talkin them gunz now
I mean ur prolly just dyin to smoke cig.. Since he left u coughing ur lungs out..
U made it deep in the 1-2 n key, then faced comp n got bullied up, bruh
So it's fitting that after those SEMI beatings.. Ur facin me to get Fully fucked up




vs



Rb's nearly man cos u still clearly wack, all ya shit is minor
S'why Only time we seeing smog on a top 5 list is reasons not to visit China,
All the times I've seen you cooked n bloodied makes me Wonder buddy
Why You think you as good Ronin 47 losses says ya more of an understudy!



pretty close one here. really liked what both brought to the battle but I'm going to go with who was more consistent and who had the more witty flips overall in his verse. props to both this week though.


v. smog