@L.E good verse as I mentioned beforehand. I'll try to stray off the government novels for a bit and stretch out my clever storytelling device. Nonetheless good pieces to everyone who dropped and so forth.
@L.E good verse as I mentioned beforehand. I'll try to stray off the government novels for a bit and stretch out my clever storytelling device. Nonetheless good pieces to everyone who dropped and so forth.
The end of a Revelation.... But a Clever Word always illustrated.
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@Sammy @L.E @Revelation 18:3
Okay, so thanks to reading Sammy's breakdown of your battle I was able to pick up on some things that went over my head.
For instance, in L's verse I was equating the 'Bastard' to an actual person or living thing instead of a personification of a concept or trait. So he kinda cleared that up for me.
Also, in Rev's verse I completely missed the 'oder'/'owe her' play on words. So my bad for harping on you about the grammar there.
Another thing...I actually googled Mavis Beacon and now better understand the stereotype line.
So, yeah...lol
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Is it possible me and Tajik can get some feed on our verses? I mean, the free dub is nice and all and I'll happily accept it, but I did take time out to write something up and would like to see what other people think about it, you feel me?
Lol@Google. Yeah Mavis beacon been around for ages. My first typing teacher lol..but yeah I'll try to feed some soon.
The end of a Revelation.... But a Clever Word always illustrated.
Man, at my school we started typing like in the 2nd grade. We had a computer lab and all the computers in there had keyboards with a black rubber like cover over them so you couldn't see the keys. Long story short: I have no clue what program we used from way back then, but I do know that by the end of that year we all knew how to type like adults. Hence probably why I never heard of MB I'm guessing. Just never had any use for It. Then again, maybe that what we were using...but I was 7 or 8...I have no clue lol
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OAN: minus the no shows...it was a pretty good opening week. Everyone that drop put up some interesting content.
I was thinking next week. Doing something graphic such as Horrorcore. Get descriptive and eerie lol
The end of a Revelation.... But a Clever Word always illustrated.
I don't think anyone's done anything like that in a long ass time. It would be dope to see.
What's good y'all?
A.i
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*Click one of ^those to check out my music and shit
Nothing much...we need some horrorcore drops because this site already on necrophilia....
The end of a Revelation.... But a Clever Word always illustrated.
Hey who is keeping track of the battle records? I'd like to see what my official tally is between last season and this one.
Wassup peeps As far as the records go. It will start fresh with this league this week. I also thank those who dropped and I will get to everyone verse especially trajik and self. @trajik you will have a worthy opponent next week, stay in my brethren.
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@Revelation 18:3
@143
Thanks for the feed peoples. You know how I feel about you guys and respect your opinion. I wasn't sure if anyone was going to truly get it since I'm no master of the abstract style, but it was cool to find out that you guys resonated with it. It was a fun verse to write and even better reading the replies.
@OG Maestro ... What happen bro? You don't usual no show. Everything cool on your end?
@SELF ACTIVATE , no worries, it was a great read.
I'll go in and feed the other links soon.
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