Dead Emcee Scrolls Part 1.

[Nigma]

Always takin aim, sendin missles hittin crisp, it’s tactics
Only spray and pray while lazy, pissin in the pitch blackness
With my grasp of mind and matter every time I rhyme, I smash it
My attacks’ll back you out like a protruding spinal fracture
I pursue the kinda magic that made Zeus the titans master
Producing primal patterns, every moves a slight disaster
I’m infused with mild manners, I cry in acid, sometimes I panic
when my eyes flip back ‘n scramble, admiring my mind in action
As wise as the suns inventors. Met them in a slumber session
Set the bar and hit them with a double like theirs pun intended
Beef with me? Ya dealin with more shit than a behemoths spleen
My teams supreme, chance of winning thin as a bulimics dreams
See the scenes? We hit ya till the clips are gone, then roll the credits
Know you bitches botch it. Outta split the loss like co-defendants

Nigma...

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[Oxymoron]

okay to me this started out okay, a little iffy on the rhymes but by the 3rd line this was picking up into cool as for me.

With my grasp of mind and matter every time I rhyme, I smash it
My attacks’ll back you out like a protruding spinal fracture
I pursue the kinda magic that made Zeus the titans master
Producing primal patterns, every moves a slight disaster
I’m infused with mild manners, I cry in acid, sometimes I panic
when my eyes flip back ‘n scramble, admiring my mind in action

I thought this bit had a cool scheme and imagry going on, my fav bit.


rest had some cool rhymes and imagry too. So multis were good schemes were solid but the quoted bit was the best. umm yeah. couldnt extract too much. first 2 lines flowed a lil eh, but other than i thought this was a smooth read.

solid overall.

[Nigma]

okay to me this started out okay, a little iffy on the rhymes but by the 3rd line this was picking up into cool as for me.



I thought this bit had a cool scheme and imagry going on, my fav bit.


rest had some cool rhymes and imagry too. So multis were good schemes were solid but the quoted bit was the best. umm yeah. couldnt extract too much. first 2 lines flowed a lil eh, but other than i thought this was a smooth read.

solid overall.

Thanks for the read broseph. I wrote the first line at 3:30 one morning when I didnt wanna turn the light on so I lifted up the seat, gauged where to aim, and just gaver. Fuckin nailed it too, right into the water the whole time. Scary shit tho man.. Some scary shit.

[Emily]

This started off slow but then got powerful, fast.
The third bar hooked me in.
It was a fast read, I can't break it down cause it's nearly three am lol.
(I noticed a couple of typo's lol)

Some good moments ...

'With my grasp of mind and matter every time I rhyme, I smash it' ---3rd line

'My attacks’ll back you out like a protruding spinal fracture'

'I pursue the kinda magic that made Zeus the titans master'

'I’m infused with mild manners, I cry in acid, sometimes I panic'

...my favourite:

'My teams supreme, chance of winning thin as a bulimics dreams'

Good stuff nigma.
Fun read.

[Seraph]

Always takin aim, sendin missles hittin crisp, it’s tactics
Only spray and pray while lazy, pissin in the pitch blackness
Didn't get this bar...

With my grasp of mind and matter every time I rhyme, I smash it
My attacks’ll back you out like a protruding spinal fracture
Didn't rhyme but the imagery was cool, not bad

I pursue the kinda magic that made Zeus the titans master
Producing primal patterns, every moves a slight disaster
I liked this bar, easily my favourite one. Flowed well, nice image...

I’m infused with mild manners, I cry in acid, sometimes I panic
when my eyes flip back ‘n scramble, admiring my mind in action
Don't think "crying in acid" is a good thing, the verse is kinda horrorcoreish, but crying in a burning substance makes it sound like youre just a regular human, not capable of anything really. I like

As wise as the suns inventors. Met them in a slumber session
Set the bar and hit them with a double like theirs pun intended
Didn't get this but it flowed pretty nicely. The first line was good but the second didn't do anything.

Beef with me? Ya dealin with more shit than a behemoths spleen
My teams supreme, chance of winning thin as a bulimics dreams
This was clever. Loved it. The lines made sense both on their own and together.

See the scenes? We hit ya till the clips are gone, then roll the credits
Know you bitches botch it. Outta split the loss like co-defendants
Didn't like the transition from Godly and inhuman events to relying on shooting someone, but again, clever. "Clips are gone, then roll the credits" -- really enjoyed that part. The second line read well but didn't make much sense to me.


Nice read. Few solid bars in there, keep at it.
Peace.