Aight we are going
16-20 lines
due by wensday
you both know the rules I expect a dope match
@ILLunatic @xXfreshXx
Aight we are going
16-20 lines
due by wensday
you both know the rules I expect a dope match
@ILLunatic @xXfreshXx
checkmate
jk g/l ILL
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I'm stoopin almost to dia's level, and definitely to yours just for the kill
Cause like his fascination.. Dead relatives the only way you getting the W ILL..
You're like a boy with a temper, I'll destroy you... surrender
I'll cut you off at the source, theres no way you're avoiding dismember
Now considering the first 3 letters of ya name don't correspond at all
I'll allow it since the last part of ya name takes the brunt of the fall
You cant come with any wit and will never spit anything thought provoking
Kind of like how you will never hear someone yell out "ahhhhhh I'm choking"
My flow is unstoppable, you're basically dead in the water like a yacht eroding
Your level can't be topped, because you're so high from the pot you've been smoking
Your chances of prevailing are narrow, so I'll tell ya straight bro
With disses so fuckin hot it'll burn, and you'll be feeling hella pain yo
But I'll admit you deserve some respect like dyslexic's using scrabble
Although its all in vain... it takes courage to fight in a losing battle
You're a skinny little administrator bitch, no wonder you're peaceful
Dopping wack SHIT is the ONLY time you can ever do a number on people
@ILLunatic
When they call you fresh; man, they say it with a different meaning
You're the new kid on the scene, not the dope textcee competing
& the medal you seek, you can see it, but you'll never grasp shit
And what I don't get...
...how you fresh yet before you throw punches you're already gassed kid
Just take a minute, start relaxin. Continue to practice, there's always next time
& to be honest, your best line was the space that came after your last rhyme
You're a joke bro, now more than ever before.... Just stating a simple fact
Cuz anybody depressed enough to rep The Senate, honestly is Certified Wack
The thought of you holding a title, quite literally makes me cringe though
So much to the point, I'd walk away n say "I am sorry for what I did Strobe"
But that chances of that are considerably far from fat... Zero to none
Maybe someday you'll hold it once, but there's no way today is the one
This fugly fucking Canadian ain't shit, maybe harsh but he's not new to it
And that fucking pic with a cig in ya mouth... Got me questioning being the lunatic
Fuck this shit, I'm through with it.... It's just another L fresh, don't be sad
But to keep it real, if I lose to this bitch... This'll be the last battle I ever have
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Opener, pot smoking. W. Ill.
Vs
Gassed. SPACE last rhyme LOTB. Strobe bar
Iunno even on quotes here. But space bar was ficken dope af to me. So that tipped it.
Battle.was meh tho.
Vote. illunatic
LethalXpressionZ
Xpressing Lethalness
N thrse are suppose to have a poll foo
LethalXpressionZ
Xpressing Lethalness
Poll added @Kontext
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Originally Posted by .fresh.
I'm disappointed in this as a champ match.
Fresh you need to focus on nailing every line, quit wasting oppurtunity in filler lines.
I'll, you didn't throw a single punch! Unless I missed a personal aspect of EVERY bar.
V/ @.fresh.
I'm stoopin almost to dia's level, and definitely to yours just for the kill
Cause like his fascination.. Dead relatives the only way you getting the W ILL..
Nice punch good wording
You're like a boy with a temper, I'll destroy you... surrender
I'll cut you off at the source, theres no way you're avoiding dismember
Again I like the wp here, good punch
Now considering the first 3 letters of ya name don't correspond at all
I'll allow it since the last part of ya name takes the brunt of the fall
Don't feel this one to much
You cant come with any wit and will never spit anything thought provoking
Kind of like how you will never hear someone yell out "ahhhhhh I'm choking"
Again don't really like that to much
My flow is unstoppable, you're basically dead in the water like a yacht eroding
Your level can't be topped, because you're so high from the pot you've been smoking
Ok but not to hard
Your chances of prevailing are narrow, so I'll tell ya straight bro
With disses so fuckin hot it'll burn, and you'll be feeling hella pain yo
Good hit jalepeno/hella pain yo like that
But I'll admit you deserve some respect like dyslexic's using scrabble
Although its all in vain... it takes courage to fight in a losing battle
Ok but not great
You're a skinny little administrator bitch, no wonder you're peaceful
Dopping wack SHIT is the ONLY time you can ever do a number on people
Alright that works
Vs.....
When they call you fresh; man, they say it with a different meaning
You're the new kid on the scene, not the dope textcee competing
Statement, nothing creative
& the medal you seek, you can see it, but you'll never grasp shit
And what I don't get...
...how you fresh yet before you throw punches you're already gassed kid
Ok that's pretty good I guess
Just take a minute, start relaxin. Continue to practice, there's always next time
& to be honest, your best line was the space that came after your last rhyme
Ok again
You're a joke bro, now more than ever before.... Just stating a simple fact
Cuz anybody depressed enough to rep The Senate, honestly is Certified Wack
No not feeling that
The thought of you holding a title, quite literally makes me cringe though
So much to the point, I'd walk away n say "I am sorry for what I did Strobe"
Ok again
But that chances of that are considerably far from fat... Zero to none
Maybe someday you'll hold it once, but there's no way today is the one
Nah not good
This fugly fucking Canadian ain't shit, maybe harsh but he's not new to it
And that fucking pic with a cig in ya mouth... Got me questioning being the lunatic
Lol, pretty good
Fuck this shit, I'm through with it.... It's just another L fresh, don't be sad
But to keep it real, if I lose to this bitch... This'll be the last battle I ever have
Uh oh...
Well I think fresh actually landed more hits here, less statements, he had wp to go with his attack... I liked the hella pain yo line.. ILL kinda mainly made statements not much creativity in his flow, alto he had a better glue he lacked punches.... IMO I believe fresh dominated this match really...good job to both though
Vote fresh
I'm stoopin almost to dia's level, and definitely to yours just for the kill
Cause like his fascination.. Dead relatives the only way you getting the W ILL..
You're like a boy with a temper, I'll destroy you... surrender
I'll cut you off at the source, theres no way you're avoiding dismember
vs
& the medal you seek, you can see it, but you'll never grasp shit
And what I don't get...
...how you fresh yet before you throw punches you're already gassed kid
Just take a minute, start relaxin. Continue to practice, there's always next time
& to be honest, your best line was the space that came after your last rhyme
iLL didn't even try. had a grip of filler and wack punches. I gotta give it to fresh for havin a more consistent verse and better punch attempts overall.
v. fresh
(I don't text battle like that, so this vote can be discarded)
Vote: Fresh
When I read your diss @ILLunatic it tripped me out. It seemed like it was a speech of how terrible Fresh is. Statements.
Why do you think that? Maybe it was the correct grammar? I remember when I text battled my grammar never faltered so people read it like a standard English sentence instead of rapping it like a line of lyrics.
I noticed that when people use lingo/street vernacular in these battles, it appeals to people's areas of language. Like, there's UK guys on here. So if you made a reference to "mandy" people would get that. Because the x-tasy nickname for "molly" is "mandy" over there.
"ya" "faggot" "breakin'" "smokin'", you know? Just all the broken down terminology that gives rap battling its edge. Because if you watch a KOTD battle, you'll notice that words are STRESSED & SLANTED. So that they rhyme, give different meanings, etc. In TEXT it's harder to do that, so people type in broken down lingo so that the readers can comprehend it better.
Maybe you should do that?
Fresh's bars weren't good. Most of it was just there for the hell of it.
I don't know what it was man. I just wasn't feeling this battle. Seemed like you guys lost interest, maybe. Well, I give this to Fresh because he had some bars.
I'm stoopin almost to dia's level, and definitely to yours just for the kill
Cause like his fascination.. Dead relatives the only way you getting the W ILL..
I think kontext might have slept on this. The space bar wasn't that dope, but that's how he was feeling when he read it. no hate
I read it like. W ILL. Win ILLunatic. Then, W ILL as in for a contract of possession distribution after death. See: dead relatives for the setup & "dia" for the first set up. And then WILL if that's ILL's name. lmaoo, probably not but yeah...
That was the bar of the battle. Goodluck to both of you.
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I'm stoopin almost to dia's level, and definitely to yours just for the kill
Cause like his fascination.. Dead relatives the only way you getting the W ILL..
You're like a boy with a temper, I'll destroy you... surrender
I'll cut you off at the source, theres no way you're avoiding dismember
vs
Just take a minute, start relaxin. Continue to practice, there's always next time
& to be honest, your best line was the space that came after your last rhyme
Looks like Fresh will be retiring @ILLunatic , huh? Hahaha... Ok'ish battle. Fresh, that dismemberment line was dope dude. Could have been worded a little better but you did a nice job in your delivery. Good shit. ILL's verses was a little too basic and lacked creativity. If you are going to go basic, IMO - Add lots of humor or personals. That will help with the effectiveness in your verse. This would have been cool if it was a live battle but it's text.
Congrat's to the new CHAMP. Hell if fresh can do it, ANYONE CAN, LMAO - JK, bro. Good job.
v/Fresh
Dead relative, dismember
Vs.
Last rhyme
Battle was meh ill didn't really throw anything, fresh dismember won it coo shit
V/fresh
@Lawd can you poll your vote homie. -fresh
Last edited by Fresh; February 20th, 2014 at 11:54 AM
I'll count Frost's vote...
Fresh, we've already discussed it... congratulations.
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