W3: Orc vs. Mister Write - Orc wins

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10-20 lines (limit increases for playoffs)

check ins (pics if necessary) due Saturday
verses due Sunday OCTOBER 20TH (unless an extension is granted)

good luck & happy murkings

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@Orc @Mister Write

[Spoken]

I GOT YA..

10 match me

[Orc]

Yea ill be here

[Orc]

Ima sever throats. Mr Forever Alone aint never dope
His idea of Mister and Mrs. is a notepad plus every line he ever wrote
I hada ill time this weekend. Had a band in the house
Dog. Ur idea of a Refreshing Night includes an ex's Facebook and ya hand ona mouse
Face it herb there'll be raking burns wen dust settles
Trust you'll Catch a Body then Fall Back like taking turns at Trust Lessons
His squeeze be taking pics &that bitch NEVER leaves him in it
Damnn. Ya girl gotta Crop Scheme that'd reinvent Farming Techniques in minutes
Ur out in Guam fagt. Hardly a party nation
Irony101: you never Touched Base wita chick & ya hometowns an Army Station

[Spoken]

You've been around the best N' that's been surely noted,
But till this day the BURDEN we've had is the fact of who actually wrote it.
Separate the weak and your left coated and missin'
HoF Battles? just to thank the fella for the ass whoopin' u we're given.
Your hardly trusted and that's a fact from the waste,
I mean ...your bitch chase S'like your text game at its best- mostly copy and paste.
Knowledge? I got it, we kno BIRD a sell-ticks boy, whose lost best fights,
And I mean this in both terms of how u always lose at ur prime- magic mike
Im cut from wealth and respect- to understand that's more organized than this fake,
Up against a royal flush no matter the turn or river forcing orchestrate.

[%1'er]

I hada ill time this weekend. Had a band in the house
Dog. Ur idea of a Refreshing Night includes an ex's Facebook and ya hand ona mouse
His squeeze be taking pics &that bitch NEVER leaves him in it
Damnn. Ya girl gotta Crop Scheme that'd reinvent Farming Techniques in minutes
Ur out in Guam fagt. Hardly a party nation
Irony101: you never Touched Base wita chick & ya hometowns an Army Station



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You've been around the best N' that's been surely noted,
But till this day the BURDEN we've had is the fact of who actually wrote it.
Separate the weak and your left coated and missin'
HoF Battles? just to thank the fella for the ass whoopin' u we're given.
Im cut from wealth and respect- to understand that's more organized than this fake,
Up against a royal flush no matter the turn or river forcing orchestrate.




this was pretty close battle here, both came decent nothing really stood out & shined ... one bar that was worth mention was the Farming Techniques one .. shit was dope .. Kharn I feel like your wording held you back here or this would have gone either way ..

[Sintro.]

orc
I hada ill time this weekend. Had a band in the house
Dog. Ur idea of a Refreshing Night includes an ex's Facebook and ya hand ona mouse
Face it herb there'll be raking burns wen dust settles
Trust you'll Catch a Body then Fall Back like taking turns at Trust Lessons
His squeeze be taking pics &that bitch NEVER leaves him in it
Damnn. Ya girl gotta Crop Scheme that'd reinvent Farming Techniques in minutes
all pretty solid. catch a body n crop schemes were dope

write
not tryna be harsh but i cudnt get into ur verse. it didnt have any punches that hit hard or were worded to my liking. just not my style of battle verse. vote orc

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so did Khan even vote? lol

anyway

I got Mister and misses, refreshing night n touched base all being really dope from Orc. wording n concepts mostdef on point, refreshing night was my fave outta the 3. overall solid verse. crop scheme was an almost

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copy and paste had potential, but wording was just off/the concept wasn't used right imo. other than that, I like how u tried to get personal when u saw that Orc didn't, but u gotta incorporate good concepts w/ good personals for that style to work. couple came off too bland n Orchestrate is played. good effort tho bro, thanks for showing up, glad both of u are showing interest in the league

v/Orc

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Ima sever throats. Mr Forever Alone aint never dope
His idea of Mister and Mrs. is a notepad plus every line he ever wrote
I hada ill time this weekend. Had a band in the house
Dog. Ur idea of a Refreshing Night includes an ex's Facebook and ya hand ona mouse
^^LOLL
Ur out in Guam fagt. Hardly a party nation
Irony101: you never Touched Base wita chick & ya hometowns an Army Station

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Separate the weak and your left coated and missin'
HoF Battles? just to thank the fella for the ass whoopin' u we're given.

orc took this easily imo. orchestrate line from mirster write was ok almost quoted it..

v/ orc

[Spoken]

word i knew id still lose always having issues with my wording thanks @Orc for showing up

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Ima sever throats. Mr Forever Alone aint never dope
His idea of Mister and Mrs. is a notepad plus every line he ever wrote
I hada ill time this weekend. Had a band in the house
Dog. Ur idea of a Refreshing Night includes an ex's Facebook and ya hand ona mouse
His squeeze be taking pics &that bitch NEVER leaves him in it
Damnn. Ya girl gotta Crop Scheme that'd reinvent Farming Techniques in minutes
Ur out in Guam fagt. Hardly a party nation
Irony101: you never Touched Base wita chick & ya hometowns an Army Station

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Im cut from wealth and respect- to understand that's more organized than this fake,
Up against a royal flush no matter the turn or river forcing orchestrate.

close out here. Orc took this very easily. but thank you Mister Write for showing. i'm glad your open to feed back/criticism on your verse/wording.. if you ever need help, hawla back. you know any of us would be happy to help you make the punches connect. the one i quoted has been used before on Orc(concept wise). good read tho. enjoyed it. hope everyone continues to show and keep this league active.

v/ Orc

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His squeeze be taking pics &that bitch NEVER leaves him in it
Damnn. Ya girl gotta Crop Scheme that'd reinvent Farming Techniques in minutes

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Nothing from Mister Write.

I expected more from both but based on what was here, I got Orc taking it by a single punch.

Vote - Orc

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6-0 I believe, props to both for showing n stay the fuck up