Bath Salts

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if you don't know me, my name is alan...sup
couple shots of vodka, okay fill me up
im so tired of living this lifestyle
back in the crib with a mic now
fucked up, grand down
maybe thats all I am now
a pawn in your system, breaking down like that poison
it languishes my languages, so I'm a disappointment
my anguish is innate, I'll take a trip to unemployment
then I'll plain encrypt my grave with 'you cant beat em, so join em'
My anger's been misplaced cause I paid for my enjoyment
On my menelaus, troy shit, I slave away for coitus
I built your city, you fuck with me, I'll destroy it
Your life is on the line, sit down and look at your choices
yeah, I'm bout to tear up the world, I'm hearing voices
I promise, and I put that on my momma like a freudian
Must be on my bath salts, walking from that last call
Trippin up and I'm high strung, passing out on that asphalt

woke up in the morning and I did this shit again
Another politician tied up in my den
A C.E.O. is laying on my table
and he ain't got no face no more
can't believe that I did this shit again
Another politician tied up in my den
My C.E.O. is laying on my table
and he ain't got no face no more

I'm Egalitarian, therefore I am a terrorist
Challenging the government that yall think is American
Martin and Malcolm paved the road for a black president
He's the one that made it legal to detain em
But we who seek to be equal will never be sedated
My people see through police who beat you to be complacent
and assuage my desire, my fire, I'm a fighter, a societal danger
yeah, I'm bout to tear up the world, I'm hearing voices
I promise, and I put that on my momma like a freudian
Must be on my bath salts, walking from that last call
Trippin up and I'm high strung, passing out on that asphalt


woke up in the morning and I did this shit again
Another politician tied up in my den
A C.E.O. is laying on my table
and he ain't got no face no more
can't believe that I did this shit again
Another politician tied up in my den
My C.E.O. is laying on my table
and he ain't got no face no more

[CruelIntent]

The lyrics and flow are on point, the beats cool too, you need to eq better imo your vocals are really low
overall i like it

[DeathChamberz]

As said before flow and lyrics really impressed me didn't expect it to go. I think more energy in your voice could help and recording quality needs to improve

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