fuck this
fuck this
Last edited by #PrimeTime; December 6th, 2011 at 11:53 PM
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Originally Posted by Celph Taut
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nothing really stood out. as you said a random freesyle, something to keep us entertained in the meanwhile. i'll keep checking up on you to see how you really flow. keep elevating
pc. Hope.
You have good writing skills, but this wasn't your best piece. It ain't bad for a freestyle tho. Keep writing, homie. Maybe do an OM together if you feel like doing one.
Take a Look at my Life
yeah, nothing really stood out. was random but this is what a freestyle is. not great feed but is only a freestyle, catch your next piece.
keep going
Its oh so wrong but oh so right
rofl bump
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Originally Posted by Celph Taut
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Ima get at this soon...
The Mothefucking Birth Of Creation
Infekted Penz
i dunno what yall talking about here just a random freestyle??? look at fukin vocab content he used and flow and also emotion he expressed that in his freestyle. to me for a freestyle jeff my dude i felt it was good cuz u used emotion and overall expression towards ur feelings on shit and expression on how u live ur life drama free and also an expression of u just lounging having fun. so my dude good write
Joe for the win, everyone else go to hell
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Originally Posted by Celph Taut
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ya'll niggas thinkin this "nothin stood out" bull shit.
i aint neva write a fuckin topical n shit like..
"the grass is cut its green like crayons
sky is blue blah blah"
fuck that, expand ur damn horizons.
u all suck ass.
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Originally Posted by Celph Taut
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I like the free homie, the "anti status quo" stance is prevelant here. Maybe the feeds on here were for quickness to drop something I don't know but on the technical merits it was sound through and through. You have a good imagery of the opposites you presented with some well place sims. I felt that OM is for writers and not as dramatic or emo as they can but just to be able write for themselves and not an idea of what a OM should be held up to. This here is perfect example of against the norm. Good Drop homie......Now back to my vocabularic emotional drop.....lol
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Best Topical Writer: 143
bump...
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Originally Posted by Celph Taut
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stick to taking it in the mouth this sht is garbage,ha
nah but its an ok piece nothing stood out thats was like ooooooooooh thats mad relevant and sick and oooooh thats a dope metaphor it was like.....................................o.o' ok,keep writing though
#KoKane
OM mods. please close this piece n put it in the closed writtens.
bitch ass whack lames like that type of feedback^ is mad WHACK!
so yeah if u could close this, dat would be terrific, n ill get u some kool-aid sometime..
thanks.
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This sucked ass Jeff. I'm not just saying that to hate on you either. It was obvious that it wasn't a key. You were all over the damn place like a key, but your struggle to get this kind of structure and flow in your battles, so don't tell me you just keyed. Plus, you had a lot of stupid shit in there like how you love your girl and you glad you got her..yay, the NBA's back..then you fuck your enemies girls...even though you love your girl? Wtf. If this was a key, then I suggest you never do it again, cuz you're terrible at it.
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