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    Thumbs up Haunted House

    This is a song called "Haunted House" I did for my newly released debut album "Shadowless". If you want to download the full LP, go to www.thefnspot.com/shadowless and if you like my music in general, please "like" my FB page at www.facebook.com/shadowlesshiphop

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    Re: Haunted House

    Damn this was sick bro you came proper with the flow have some good lyrics I enjoyed the imagery, I like concept tracks, this could have turned out really cheesy but i think you pulled it off. Sick Drop man!

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    Re: Haunted House

    solid and slick all the way through





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    Beat Loved how the beat came in nice vibe setting
    Verse Good cadence on the beat setting up the theme of the music 2nd verse a little bit off on some of the cadence in delivery not as good as 1st verse order 1st 3rd and then 2nd
    CHorus could use something other than the music break as a Chorus

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    Re: Haunted House

    this is the most played song on your album from me !! ive always showed this one first to anyone im showing ya ish too!!

    dope shit man flow tight beat is perfect great mic presence.. clever lyrics

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    Re: Haunted House

    cold man
    reminded me of slim shady

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    Re: Haunted House

    cool ass beat

    flow was prettyy good most part, liking the lyrics.

    really feeling this track man
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    Re: Haunted House

    This was dope, i liked the beat alot and your flow was pretty spot on. I loved the howling at the offset of the verse and the piano solo at the end was sick. They lyrics were good, you had exceptional vocabulary i would just focus on finding more poetically simple ways to express certain concepts, it dosnen't always help to use the most off beat or unorthadox words you can think of, sometimes less is more ya feel me. Other than that the quality and everything is good, alot better than mine so do what you do, good shit

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    Re: Haunted House

    This was pretty sick man,I was digging this shit. Loved the beat and flow on this. Lyrics were good. Delivery could me more hyped some times, but could be because the vocals are a tad quiet.

    No hook? Damn haha.

    But this is tight man you remind me of Nas.

    We should get on a track some time, I could mix your shit to make it sound crisp as hell...get at me.

    Keep it up.



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    Re: Haunted House

    I really like this fam, pretty catchy. I caught myself bobbin to it lol. Okay first, i like the beat a lot, the organ is dope as hell. Pretty fast pace beat, i like that. you kept up well with it. Nice flow all the way through, didnt really notice any part that fell off. i like the idea, pretty dark and crazy, & you pulled it off. the lyrics are pretty dope, i understand what your talkin about... pretty visual. the quality is nice too, no static or anything, very clear on the whole track. i like the thunder cracks and the voices lol. overall this track is dope. ima listen to more of your shit famo
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    Re: Haunted House

    lyrics were dope, flow was on point
    the beat was fiya.
    cool concept -- cool song
    i like what u did with this track something different for the ears - u did well..
    ps thanx for feeding my track
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    Re: Haunted House

    haha has that scary story feel, which is obviously what your going for

    i wish the flow was slower, but i guess thats the beats fault, just a slower flow would of fit the story telling scary story vibe better

    hook is just blank?

    ahhh 2nd verse has more the feel i was looking for

    anyways nice track man keep at it
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    Re: Haunted House

    yo this shouldn't be slept on!! or the album itself....free quality hip hop over all original exclusive beats....what unsigned artist does that these days...I guess just me and Shadow lol so DOWNLOAD OUR ALBUMS!

    but yeah this is def one of my favorites of the album man....great concept...you pulled it off it could have been real cheesy but the imagery in this was dope beat fit it perfect along with your flow...def a creepy vibe on this
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    Re: Haunted House

    Oh shit, i like the way yo just come in, the flow is is nice, i wish your energy stayed up through out the whole track cuz u caught me with it the first few bars. Still though your flow is real dope on this. Lyricsm is definitely the strong point of yours, great imagery. Delivery still could use work though, try to sound more natural. Keep it going tho

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    returnin feed...beat is very orchestraic..if thats a word. but thats the vibe i get. you def sound like Necro. real evil. its tight though. i wasnt really feelin the beat at first, but its growin on me. the vocals are a bit loud, kinda overpowering the beat, but only in a minor way. its still enjoyable. the beat again, still growing on me, but its dope. alot of shit goin on in it. really full. second verse is much for the first. nothin really bad to say here man. its dope. keep em comin.

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