Originally Posted by
Vandahl.
From The Depths
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..Standing upon a the peak of Olympus..
I rose from the oceans abyss, levitating, I floated adrift
Over Earth's civilizations as cement eroded to crisps!!
The wind's coated by mists, No longer chained or at hold by the wrist
As I remotely code a bomb, to make you explode at the hip
I'm controlling your motion with my mind you're hopin' to shift!!
I strip every devotion by vocally quoting the emotions you spit
Notice my holsters equipped & after that you'll hopefully quit
Cause when the work is done, I go home, to roll me a spliff
..Above the Heavens..
This was a nice opener, it flowed well.. But your imagery was here and there.
I'm Close to the edge, I smirk when I work to dispose of the dead
& for what it's worth, you haven't spit a verse full words to get cred
Hurt then collect, bones get rid of foes gassed like a burp from the chest
Murder and rape a virgin for sex, gettin' off by her squirmin' in red
Piss acid on her, inject worms in her head, let the vermin infest
Inject cyanide so she burns from within, your career yearns to begin
But nope, you can't even learn to defend, when I stab you firm in the leg
Then take control of Earth & make Hitler's armies return from the dead
..Beneath the crust..
Again cool flow and multis, imagery was stronger.
Scandalous Grammar, those with ill tongues.. with weapons of tyrants
You'll laugh.. till I telepathically tamper with your molecular alignment
Lyrically summon the Kraken to start shipwrecking you pirates
Shining vibrant, the ideal of depression and aggression united
Always ignored the lessons provided, was too busy, suppressed in my writin'
Instead of drug obsession, I progress in assignments - I'm less than compliant
On a never-ending quest to leave a trident pressed in Poseidon
Of course..we all want a piece of the pie, but no questions; you'd bite it
..In the Land of the Dead..
Turned into kinda of a flex.. IMO - Still good flow and multis
I'm villainous, so diligent of my militant presence
Fakin' etiquette and expressions for political delegates - Nah
I was sent from the heavens to edit religions typical message
Manifest some pivotal leverage to leave a critical hemorrhage
And for the record...I'll turn every rebel into a literal leper
To stress and test every better minimal deafened pitiful peasant
Cause, instead of frettin' & worshiping cynical reverends
I was forcing paganism upon the young with habitual effort
..I arose from Whirlpool of Souls..
This part I wasn't feeling that much, Iunno flow and multi... AGAIN Cool... But the word placement IMO - Just didn't seem to match the piece. Still a good stanza.
And from the depths I've come to object everyone of the best
Detesting the level of text from these so called "eloquent heads"
I rhyme, combustible elements spread till enemies are severed to death
Flesh tethered and stretched till leprosy infected tremors embed
Then piece together an evil sequence of weather with a devilish grin
I blatantly wake the devils within, to escape and address my level of sin
See, I'll never fail or succumb to the frail, leave everyone's lungs full of nails
Breach through skin, I'm reachin' within to make your soul plummet to hell..
Nice way to end, back on track with the style of the drop you started out with.