Arch. 4-3 (wins) Vs. Dehesa 3-0

[Tim]

Lethal Lyricist League Week 14

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Check in due Thursday 11.59pm EST.
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Verses due by Friday 11.59pm EST.
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[Teknyshun]

Good Luck

[The Archetype]

Lol i'm gonna be way busy tomorrow also.. but ok, I'll see what i can do I shouldn't have procrastinated tbh

Well...

Whether or not you should've procrastinated isn't really a question
The smart move would've been to save your embarrassment and not checked in
I've seen his verses since he came back. I can't believe this fucker tries
Been no showed 3 weeks in a row and I still voted for the other guy
Abi told me you hit her up about my battles. Usually that shit would get you stomped
But I'm old enough to realize every chick has one homosexual confidant
No one in the league's even believing that I'll be tested by this weakling
The way I beat this pussy up my girl will accuse me of cheating
You're among the dregs of LLL. Saying you're trash isn't even hatin'
You'll never be rated High Tek when all of your concepts are ancient
No one thinks this fag's intimidating. Tek's not one to dispose his foes
If this bitch ever grips a pump... it's just cuz his heels were hurting his toes
If he pops off, he'll lose his breath. Arch'll have a hand in his death
I won't hesitate to shoot a Tek w/o anyone needing to argue w/ the ref
Every GoW post gets your cosign. Out of everyone's verses, his do no wrong
You'd probably wear his for skin... since you been on his dick just as long
Tek followed God like a fanatic. It was just proof this kid's a queer
But it's like GoW had his showdown at high noon the way Shadow disappeared

...blah...

[Teknyshun]

I noticed a common factor in 3 of your GT battles, ya lil cunt
Behind every fidgetting sloppy rhyming fagg there's an abiona lund
I know she aint that white girl in your tunk and G.A. battles
But i see you pointing back minute 9 & a half at your full grown dairy cattle
How you gonna let a 5'2" white boy jew, rape you so sadly!
I mean you shoulda put tunk in ya trunk...smh just take notes from abi
This battle's like races & marches, I'll have to load up on starches
It's like my verse is forest gump, the way it's running over arches
Like asphalt ur skin is the darkest, dude's straight.. black
And that's an oxymoron cuz if i passed you some pussy you'd pass it right back
You prolly gonna go to jail for touchin young gail
In court she'll just say arch is the sand man, and he got in her pale.
I'm rushing the quickness with knowledge and swiftness
No pun intended, but imma be the end of this war with g0d as my witness
rofl "I bow to abi" in every match that arche sets!
We can see the way you bend, that there is horrible stucture to all architects
Abi is hot, no lie, good looks, a fly lil book worm inside
She's the libriarian type, so i wanted to check out an std i'd just look in her arc hives.


rofl my bad man.. literally should have not procrastinated vs. you just a way busy week.

[Bongkers]

Whether or not you should've procrastinated isn't really a question
The smart move would've been to save your embarrassment and not checked in
ehh..
I've seen his verses since he came back. I can't believe this fucker tries
Been no showed 3 weeks in a row and I still voted for the other guy
ok
Abi told me you hit her up about my battles. Usually that shit would get you stomped
But I'm old enough to realize every chick has one homosexual confidant
lol nice
No one in the league's even believing that I'll be tested by this weakling
The way I beat this pussy up my girl will accuse me of cheating
nahh
You're among the dregs of LLL. Saying you're trash isn't even hatin'
You'll never be rated High Tek when all of your concepts are ancient
nice
No one thinks this fag's intimidating. Tek's not one to dispose his foes
If this bitch ever grips a pump... it's just cuz his heels were hurting his toes
meh
If he pops off, he'll lose his breath. Arch'll have a hand in his death
I won't hesitate to shoot a Tek w/o anyone needing to argue w/ the ref
didn't like how it was worded but nice concept
Every GoW post gets your cosign. Out of everyone's verses, his do no wrong
You'd probably wear his for skin... since you been on his dick just as long
ok..
Tek followed God like a fanatic. It was just proof this kid's a queer
But it's like GoW had his showdown at high noon the way Shadow disappeared
not bad






I noticed a common factor in 3 of your GT battles, ya lil cunt
Behind every fidgetting sloppy rhyming fagg there's an abiona lund
eh
I know she aint that white girl in your tunk and G.A. battles
But i see you pointing back minute 9 & a half at your full grown dairy cattle
nah
How you gonna let a 5'2" white boy jew, rape you so sadly!
I mean you shoulda put tunk in ya trunk...smh just take notes from abi
ok
This battle's like races & marches, I'll have to load up on starches
It's like my verse is forest gump, the way it's running over arches
nah
Like asphalt ur skin is the darkest, dude's straight.. black
And that's an oxymoron cuz if i passed you some pussy you'd pass it right back
eh.. OK
You prolly gonna go to jail for touchin young gail
In court she'll just say arch is the sand man, and he got in her pale.
no
I'm rushing the quickness with knowledge and swiftness
No pun intended, but imma be the end of this war with g0d as my witness
eh
rofl "I bow to abi" in every match that arche sets!
We can see the way you bend, that there is horrible stucture to all architects
not feeling it sorry lol
Abi is hot, no lie, good looks, a fly lil book worm inside
She's the libriarian type, so i wanted to check out an std i'd just look in her arc hives.
OK.. wording was a little off



V - Arch


Tek dropped really weak IMO, maybe he rushed I dunno but Arch got this comfortably.. no hate Tek

[Gramur]

Arch

the opener was a bit simple..

I've seen his verses since he came back. I can't believe this fucker tries
Been no showed 3 weeks in a row and I still voted for the other guy
Abi told me you hit her up about my battles. Usually that shit would get you stomped
But I'm old enough to realize every chick has one homosexual confidant
No one in the league's even believing that I'll be tested by this weakling
The way I beat this pussy up my girl will accuse me of cheating

^the first couplet was an aite personal, homosexual confidant made me chuckle, and the 3rd couplet was aite also..

You're among the dregs of LLL. Saying you're trash isn't even hatin'
You'll never be rated High Tek when all of your concepts are ancient
No one thinks this fag's intimidating. Tek's not one to dispose his foes
If this bitch ever grips a pump... it's just cuz his heels were hurting his toes

^High Tek/ancient was a good play off his name, pump/heels was ok too

wasn't feeling the Shoot tek/ref couplet...for skin/foreskin was ok concept

closer was aite...

overall this was a solid verse...no haymakers imo but for the most part everything was decent...

D,

I wasn't feeling your first two couplets, they were kinda bland...the arches nameplay was aite, architechs was aite nameplay too but kinda forced...idk, I just wasn't feeling alot of ya verse to be honest, alot of stuff didn't connect to me, some of the concepts were there but not enough punch behind them..

vote-Arch

[Orc]

Abi told me you hit her up about my battles. Usually that shit would get you stomped
But I'm old enough to realize every chick has one homosexual confidant
You're among the dregs of LLL. Saying you're trash isn't even hatin'
You'll never be rated High Tek when all of your concepts are ancient
No one thinks this fag's intimidating. Tek's not one to dispose his foes
If this bitch ever grips a pump... it's just cuz his heels were hurting his toes

wording was a bit bland thruout. rhyming was bad too. concepts were nice tho aside from the played opener n 2nd line



vs

gotta be honest shadow. u just had an off wk. seems mad rushed. i didnt like any of ya lines. cuda just been the wording. the concept were there but ya just didnt make them sting. bad luck, u'll do better nxt wk man.


v/ arc

[Per$onal]

You're among the dregs of LLL. Saying you're trash isn't even hatin'
You'll never be rated High Tek when all of your concepts are ancient
No one thinks this fag's intimidating. Tek's not one to dispose his foes
If this bitch ever grips a pump... it's just cuz his heels were hurting his toes

vs

nothing

Arch just had a much better all around verse...vote=arch

[Tim]

Abi told me you hit her up about my battles. Usually that shit would get you stomped
But I'm old enough to realize every chick has one homosexual confidant
You're among the dregs of LLL. Saying you're trash isn't even hatin'
You'll never be rated High Tek when all of your concepts are ancient

vs

Nothing

Deh seems like you came rushed this week and arch executed a better verse

vote.....Arch