Mechanical Mindstate: Poetic Concepts feat. KnowP

[KnowP]

Mechanical Mindstate
By: Poetic Concept & KnowP



They say my mental capacity is actually a causalty
By time they redesign my mind it could be a tragedy
Now I gotta make an intuitive decision
Do I loose provision, allow these clowns permission
To transform my norm and be reborn into position
Ive been warned by swarms so im prepared for this collision
I could be one of a kind, house my own intellect
And vindicate my mind, be what they aint invinted yet
Stay absolute, not absolete, opposite intent of sex
But the flesh is weak when they speak incentive checks
This is clear, either succumb to order or disappear
Who would know who I am being the only witness here
Is there a vaccine or some sort of vial waitin
If theres a glitched machine or will it be my annialation
Just die like rivaled nations, set aside like I was Haitian
Conform to this cancer, be an update-by-hours patient




Critics opposed mechanical dreams, and given a legitimate no
Though little was shown, to refute but machines did jobs citizens wont
Robotic instruments bridging the status quo, separated by subliminal woes
However this endeavor should go within our control with minimal drones
Digital probes…breaking the skin; planted digging in bones
Early visions of mechanisms driven to limitless growth
Prisons of Citizens committed to growing admittingly bold,
Simulating brain frequencies show, mind control is now written in code
Conditional pros, overlooking the cons, locked with divisible odds
Promiscuous bond, between man and machine, now a hyper critical sign
All for 1 one for all, syncing inside, meta-physical hold, another cynical boast
Given by the division of mimicking molds, living in minds leaving civility froze
Driven by the position it posed…the probability of such imminence rose,
minutes within the first clinical goals Showed the robots to think on their own,
This could just be a fanatical poem, or an ode to survive fate,
Suffice to die, inside first or succumb to a mechanical mindstate

[KnowP]

links comin

[Express'on]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...30&postcount=3
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...92&postcount=7
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...68&postcount=2
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...13&postcount=3
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...09&postcount=3

[Just Skan]

They say my mental capacity is actually a causalty
By time they redesign my mind it could be a tragedy

dope opening off the bat i caught the flow even though it changed a bit during the transition from that first line to the 2nd bu i caught right back on

Now I gotta make an intuitive decision
Do I loose provision, allow these clowns permission
To transform my norm and be reborn into position
Ive been warned by swarms so im prepared for this collision
I could be one of a kind, house my own intellect
And vindicate my mind, be what they aint invinted yet
Stay absolute, not absolete, opposite intent of sex
But the flesh is weak when they speak incentive checks

Just die like rivaled nations, set aside like I was Haitian
Conform to this cancer, be an update-by-hours patient
i liked the first linee alottttt... the 2nd line i didnt like too much tho just my opinion no disrespect



loved the rhymescheme and how you were rhyming words within each line, seemed like every rhyme you placed within the bars were greatly placed


Critics opposed mechanical dreams, and given a legitimate no
Though little was shown, to refute but machines did jobs citizens wont
Robotic instruments bridging the status quo, separated by subliminal woes
However this endeavor should go within our control with minimal drones

from there to like the immincense rose line... i honestly love the rhymes you chose...each word carefully placed and thought out, flow was easy to catch onto.

also the closer set up line i liked alot but the final line i didnt like..

overall very good read. i liked it alot keep doing your thing and send me some links when you guys drop more.

Poetic thanks for the feed you left on my OM

KP if you could leave some also id appreciate it fam
..holllaa
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...770/index.html

[Just Skan]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...691/index.html

also if you guys could hit that with some feed id appreciate it.

[Vinzr]

Both verses were nice as... good job guys. What I felt stood out from the first one was the flow, each line pretty much flowed into the next which I really thought was cool. As for the second one it was rich in vocab, not to mention the consistent rhyming scheme.

They say my mental capacity is actually a causalty
By time they redesign my mind it could be a tragedy

Dope opener.

[KnowP]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...691/index.html

also if you guys could hit that with some feed id appreciate it.

damn dog... this shyt is stupid nice!!!!

[Just Skan]

thanks alot homiee i appreciate it....this OM is dope as well haha

[Express'on]

pump...pump...pump..pump it up

[143]

Good ass verses, I like the mix of vocab and flow in this one here. KP, your opener set the tone for the rest of the verse with the tune of words that set your mind on what is about to come. Then you throw in the vocab to not only describe what's going on but in itself becoming road maps to an image your portaying. I could see the manipulation like I, Robot
Then the second verse hits with more complexity of the vocab that sends it to another level:

Critics opposed mechanical dreams, and given a legitimate no
Though little was shown, to refute but machines did jobs citizens wont
Robotic instruments bridging the status quo, separated by subliminal woes
However this endeavor should go within our control with minimal drones
Digital probes…breaking the skin; planted digging in bones
Early visions of mechanisms driven to limitless growth
Prisons of Citizens committed to growing admittingly bold,
Simulating brain frequencies show, mind control is now written in code

That did it for me, love it. You did it props with this drop here. Flawless Technique....

Hit me up, for a collab.....One

[KnowP]

thanks fams...preciate the love...anyone else drop feed, leave a link