" The Blue Prints Of A Blacc Woman"

[synickle]

One part love
to prove she has heart
One part brains
to prove she has smarts
One part emotion
which uncovers her feelings
Two parts ambition
so as to further her dealings
One part confidence
the way she walks the walk
One part vocabulary
so she knows how to talk
One part headstrong
disrespect a sister?
Now you know that's dead wrong
One part Jealousy
so you know she's with you
Two parts mushy
so you can call her "Boo"
One part culture
to prove she has clout
maintaining peace of mind
that's what she's about
One part black nationalism
so she's down for her own
Two parts age and wisdom
so you know she's full grown
One part pride
so she represents well
another part deception
so at times you can't tell
is she lying or is she truthful?
to me, she is so beautiful
fruitful
One part prenuptial
so your car is recoopable
One part advice
so you need not ask twice
One part tender care
so you know she's nice
Three parts intelligence
so you know she's not a fool
One part attractiveness
to make the white boys drool
One part envy
so the caucasians take note
I'm no racist
but it's not for the "valley girls"
that I wrote
One part ghetto
so she knows the streets
One part lyrics
so she doesn't just listen for beats
One part innovation
so she always keeps you guessing
One part hardhead
so she always keeps you stressing
Four parts respect
so you know she knows her place
One part beauty
written all over her face
Two pars devotion
so you know she's down for you
One part stubborn
doing only what she wants to do
Ten parts clever
fool a sister?
Never
One part longevity
so any storm she can weather
One part family
so introduce her to moms
One part pugnacious
so she's quick with the palms
One part attitude
so she bends over for nathan
One part real
so you know she's not faking
throw in some sex appeal
plus a little bit of freak
maintain eye contact
whenever you speak
One part resistance
then add a little persistence
if something goes down
she'll be there in an instant
those are the blueprints of a Black Woman
the traces of her soul
One part spirit
then you accomplish your goal.

[synickle]

Yo dun hate on dis piece its positive u brothers might learn somethang.

Uppin!!!!!!!!

[Calisto]

One part pugnacious
so she's quick with the palms
^^ lovin that line, I loved the concept of this it was wonderfully put together & flowed real nicely off tha tounge. The only thing that i didn't like was the whole "Blacc" woman thing, it coulda been real woman instead because I have to admit that's what deterred me from reading it the first time I noticed it, the blueprints title was pure genious though, props for that. I'd like to think that I may have some parts of whatever woman inspired this peice (whether she be dream or real) but I know that I'm not all it is actually a peice that I would aspire to in a daily sence, I think that this was an overall wonderful peice & I will definatly read all yo work in the future because you have very well defined skillz! peace boo