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    Lightbulb The Last Of Us

    a martyr traveling on a path of broken souls
    hope provokes an open road that's frozen cold
    it use to glimmer, shine like it was rolled with gold
    now it's crumbled, fallen with empires that have been broken/sold
    the old have spoke an ode that's tragic and ominous
    a story baleful, full of regret that lacks any consciousness
    it has haunted us, since the day's of time relapsed in a grain of sand
    a forsaken man with blatant plans to let hatred stand and make us damned
    it was told since the times of ancient land, before fate was planned
    after the fall of supreme's but before they could take a stand
    so now we're stuck with the trials and tribulations of wild vindication
    incarcerated in a vile sinner's sanctum masquerading as a tyrants civil nation
    we're are carcass's piled in damnation


    Your soul was sold the day god created it, you still have the relationship
    so stray from complacent-ness
    ..be yourself..
    when it comes to sin don't relate to it
    this is the truth and something you can find as fact
    if you stay on the right path, he might just buy it back


    it's corruption that has to gain from what the past has slain
    a passive stain on blood en-grained in the hands of pain
    the mask is vein, captivated but has no task or name
    a faceless past of what destruction has embarked on the masters face
    so we masquerade & let the masks parade in a passive state
    demise and deception, a rise of inception
    decline in the mind of the giants that tempt it
    the grind is redemption, and once the timing reflects it
    we will find the hand of the clock will supply our ascension
    it's not just something you can find in a sentence
    or even between the lines of who said this
    this is my mind and I spread it, until it's the thought that is passive
    until it is passed like the past and embodies the captive
    know your not trapped, take not you've adapted
    this is a fact you can quote to your grand kids
    hold it with a motive so captive, know it's astounding
    now the great souls are surrounding
    & know you are not the last of us, because it was those who have found me.
    Last edited by Alphabet; January 8th, 2014 at 04:37 PM

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    Re: The Last Of Us

    Thou art on thine period, bitch. Terrible read.

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    Re: The Last Of Us

    Ur forever on ignore faggot, quit following and commenting on my every word u fan boy loser.

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    Re: The Last Of Us

    @Johnny Soul for some feed

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    Re: The Last Of Us

    if people critique this now it could mold the outcome of future votes in SS. Patience young grass smoka, thisll get thoroughly looked over during voting time. i will say its a decent piece but im not gonna break it down at the moment

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    Re: The Last Of Us

    Alphabet art but a dull minded codpiece that is gay.

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    Re: The Last Of Us

    I'm gonna have to close this until:

    1. The SS week is done.
    2. You got your feedback links.

    Sorry brother, rules are rules. When the requirements are net I'll reopen it, delete the free posts and leave you feedback.

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