16 lines house rules. respect to my opponent =P this is my nut check.
Arch.
WiseInfidel
16 lines house rules. respect to my opponent =P this is my nut check.
yo OC got NO HEART, yes lame say "hi devil"
you trying to PLAY on my LEVEL your SHOTS GOT NO ARCH
with glocks i TOAST arch, don't need BREAD to BUTTER you
cuz HITMEN WORK FOR FREE, like FAT JOE they BUST AT YOU(song)
your SHOTS ain't COMIN THROUGH littaly like CALL OF DUTY
that's why vets don't FUCK WITH YOU cuz they know how aweful you be
you mustve CAUGHT A MOVIE....deal chump hero
damn RIGHT, you LEFT COLD ur rhymes is SUB ZERO
and like ONE KILO, even a LIGHT verse is potent(think about it)
my TRAPS will SNAP YA NECK that's how i MURK RODENTS
and ARCH COULD TYPE/archetype lyrics he's BEST TEXTEE
i'll have full albums out, you'll still be a NET EMCEE
FULL COURT PRESS MC'S, i'm WAY ABOVE YOU FUCKER
SO MY SHOTS OVER THE ARCH LIKE REGGIE MILLERS JUMPERS!!!!!
your CHEST GET HIT WITH LUMBER, ya face get maced with splinters
my COLD BARS is SUB ZERO now you 'HAIL'IN for the WINTER/winner
i expect this one to be a flame battle so kids stay up past your bedtime and don't sleep on this.
Well...
You're a faggot & a bitch. On a list of wack kids you're the worst
^^Figured I'd start the battle showing you that my setups hit harder than any punches in your verse
It'd take me minimum effort to prove to you that when using flips I'm better
It's easy for me to drop Wise... Like I was making words plural that ended in that letter
Your style is ass. This shit is sad. This beating should be deemed as a sin
It's funny. You can CAPITALIZE random words but can't capitalize on a win
I'd beat the fuck out of this faggot. Hits will break, batter and bruise ya
Wise would need a cast big enough to rival the Biggest Loser's
Me being called out isn't something that's happened as of recent
But if you're trying to make a name for yourself... At least change your monniker to something decent
Your bitching and moaning is terrible. The tough talk ain't enough to get rid of me
So when people say "Wise ass"... it's merely a description of your abilities
This nigga's a frail body. What I'd do would send PETA into rage
One hit would put his bird chest inside of his rib cage
Fuck trying to come up w/ a closer. It's not needed for this queer
You're something something like something something... (Insert something dope right here)
...blah...
Keyed from my phone so I don't know how it looks. Sorry it took so long lol
Last edited by The Archetype; November 3rd, 2010 at 10:55 PM
Your bars were like for a song, not for a rap battle, nothing was a direct punch at arch, you had ok muliteis, and some worplaly like that reggie miller line, but that has been used against arch to many timesOriginally Posted by WiseInfidel
V arch
Please vote on this- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...842/index.html
I'll hit links tomorrow when I'm on a comp. And I swear, I didn't look @ his verse lol. He capitalizes in all his battles
V. Arch.
Wise - you have to work on your wording and set-ups fam. Your style is like E said, more like a rap song, Without any direction in your set-ups or punches it's really no need for battle. Just keep working at it fam, and keep battling, you'll get it. Arch, you took this w/ better punches and just the overall better, more well-rounded verse.
yo OC got NO HEART, yes lame say "hi devil"
you trying to PLAY on my LEVEL your SHOTS GOT NO ARCH
weak/wack
with glocks i TOAST arch, don't need BREAD to BUTTER you
cuz HITMEN WORK FOR FREE, like FAT JOE they BUST AT YOU(song)
no
your SHOTS ain't COMIN THROUGH littaly like CALL OF DUTY
that's why vets don't FUCK WITH YOU cuz they know how aweful you be
wack
you mustve CAUGHT A MOVIE....deal chump hero
damn RIGHT, you LEFT COLD ur rhymes is SUB ZERO
no
and like ONE KILO, even a LIGHT verse is potent(think about it)
my TRAPS will SNAP YA NECK that's how i MURK RODENTS
multies good / bar is wack thoe
and ARCH COULD TYPE/archetype lyrics he's BEST TEXTEE
i'll have full albums out, you'll still be a NET EMCEE
wack
FULL COURT PRESS MC'S, i'm WAY ABOVE YOU FUCKER
SO MY SHOTS OVER THE ARCH LIKE REGGIE MILLERS JUMPERS!!!!!
played/ only punch you got
your CHEST GET HIT WITH LUMBER, ya face get maced with splinters
my COLD BARS is SUB ZERO now you 'HAIL'IN for the WINTER/winner
wack
overral this verse was weak you use multies real good but you didnt even throw any punches is was more a verse for opem mic or to be recorded and dont write in bold letters its newbish you need to throw actual punches not statments read other battles in abba to get a glimps of how to do a verse.. and i know i sound like a dick but im being real an dont go all postal with shit just take it as advice.
You're a faggot & a bitch. On a list of wack kids you're the worst
^^Figured I'd start the battle showing you that my setups hit harder than any punches in your verse
ROFL
It'd take me minimum effort to prove to you that when using flips I'm better
It's easy for me to drop Wise... Like I was making words plural that ended in that letter
ok
Your style is ass. This shit is sad. This beating should be deemed as a sin
It's funny. You can CAPITALIZE random words but can't capitalize on a win
LOL
I'd beat the fuck out of this faggot. Hits will break, batter and bruise ya
Wise would need a cast big enough to rival the Biggest Loser's
meh
Me being called out isn't something that's happened as of recent
But if you're trying to make a name for yourself... At least change your monniker to something decent
ok
Your bitching and moaning is terrible. The tough talk ain't enough to get rid of me
So when people say "Wise ass"... it's merely a description of your abilities
lol ok
This nigga's a frail body. What I'd do would send PETA into rage
One hit would put his bird chest inside of his rib cage
nice
Fuck trying to come up w/ a closer. It's not needed for this queer
You're something something like something something... (Insert something dope right here)
wack lol
overral this was pretty one sided arch had the more stronger lines and solid hits. he came more consitent throughout the verse except that wack closer lol wtf archie? but that wise ass line was nice.
VOTE: ARch
close this lol ..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...html?p=7885485
OKC
FULL COURT PRESS MC'S, i'm WAY ABOVE YOU FUCKER
SO MY SHOTS OVER THE ARCH LIKE REGGIE MILLERS JUMPERS!!!!!
vs
You're a faggot & a bitch. On a list of wack kids you're the worst
^^Figured I'd start the battle showing you that my setups hit harder than any punches in your verse
Your style is ass. This shit is sad. This beating should be deemed as a sin
It's funny. You can CAPITALIZE random words but can't capitalize on a win
arch had more than enough here to come through. Wise focused too much on structure and didn't form a decent punch with said my vote goes to arch.
v/Arch
I think Wise had a weak verse... well other than this bar:
FULL COURT PRESS MC'S, i'm WAY ABOVE YOU FUCKER
SO MY SHOTS OVER THE ARCH LIKE REGGIE MILLERS JUMPERS!!!!!
Arch was a lot more consistent and had better flow and not to mention his rhyming scheme was a lot better. Arch's openning was good as well as the rest, everything except the closer but even by then he would have beateny you.
V/ Arch
WiseInfidel
yo OC got NO HEART, yes lame say "hi devil"
you trying to PLAY on my LEVEL your SHOTS GOT NO ARCH
rhyme scheme was strange, still this punch didnt hit
with glocks i TOAST arch, don't need BREAD to BUTTER you
cuz HITMEN WORK FOR FREE, like FAT JOE they BUST AT YOU(song)
ehh set up was weak as well as punch
your SHOTS ain't COMIN THROUGH littaly like CALL OF DUTY
that's why vets don't FUCK WITH YOU cuz they know how aweful you be
this was a diss but not a punch
you mustve CAUGHT A MOVIE....deal chump hero
damn RIGHT, you LEFT COLD ur rhymes is SUB ZERO
nope this was a miss
and like ONE KILO, even a LIGHT verse is potent(think about it)
my TRAPS will SNAP YA NECK that's how i MURK RODENTS
you dont have to put think about it in on your bars. weak wordplay hereyou need to get a bit more creative.
and ARCH COULD TYPE/archetype lyrics he's BEST TEXTEE
i'll have full albums out, you'll still be a NET EMCEE
weak diss and you leave out words to often making your flow choppy.
FULL COURT PRESS MC'S, i'm WAY ABOVE YOU FUCKER
SO MY SHOTS OVER THE ARCH LIKE REGGIE MILLERS JUMPERS!!!!!
ok...even tho you used this concept on your first bar... lol i think you are the first person to recycle a line in the same verse your CHEST GET HIT WITH LUMBER, ya face get maced with splinters
my COLD BARS is SUB ZERO now you 'HAIL'IN for the WINTER/winner
ok u just recycled another concept. smh so/so closer
vs
Arch
You're a faggot & a bitch. On a list of wack kids you're the worst
^^Figured I'd start the battle showing you that my setups hit harder than any punches in your verse
ok opener
It'd take me minimum effort to prove to you that when using flips I'm better
It's easy for me to drop Wise... Like I was making words plural that ended in that letter
ok
Your style is ass. This shit is sad. This beating should be deemed as a sin
It's funny. You can CAPITALIZE random words but can't capitalize on a win
GEEEZ ...lmfao
I'd beat the fuck out of this faggot. Hits will break, batter and bruise ya
Wise would need a cast big enough to rival the Biggest Loser's
this was kinda cool
Me being called out isn't something that's happened as of recent
But if you're trying to make a name for yourself... At least change your monniker to something decent
ok
Your bitching and moaning is terrible. The tough talk ain't enough to get rid of me
So when people say "Wise ass"... it's merely a description of your abilities
lol
This nigga's a frail body. What I'd do would send PETA into rage
One hit would put his bird chest inside of his rib cage
aightFuck trying to come up w/ a closer. It's not needed for this queer
You're something something like something something... (Insert something dope right here)
weak close but lol
Wise you need to work on concepts man! wording and concepts. alot of the stuff you said was borderline played or it just wasnt a good concept and the wording just highlighted that fact. Easy win for Arch IMO
v/ Arch
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