Naive V Wise Infidel

[WiseInfidel]

16 bars house rules. this is the battle of the century no hype. but i been wanting to sip this niggaz blood for days. you goin down like elevators that's on the top floor i alraedy TOLD ya niggaz i sting like alchohol on open cuts bro i take names like a receptionist but like the waiter i serve you up. bro you can't even begin to UNDERSTAND the magnitude of how badly i will crush your soul. after this naive will rename himself to "can't use that as an excuse" bro i'm serious like jones and i'm ready for a deathblow like HIV positive hookers giving head. i'm hype like kobe's shoes i'm amped like 500 watts bro I WILL KILL YOU LITERALLY, I'M GOING TO YOUR HOUSE TONIGHT AND I WILL TAKE MY FUCKING KNIFE, OUT THE MOTHAFUCKIN SOCKET, AND FUCKIN THRUST THAT BITCH IN UR CHEST LIKE HIYAAAHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Naive]

Word, now stfu.

Lets get this shit crackin.

lol.

[WiseInfidel]

i have an ominous feeling that this verse is kinda weak but shit.....i already wrote it so here goes nothing


I SPIT SHELLS like SUNFLOWER SEEDS
Like muslims lifting weight you 'UP DOWN' ON YOUR KNEES
you wanna war come out here with me, i SMASH VETS
if CATS fret, insides come out like FLOWERING SEEDS
ME? I OVERPOWER MCS, this cats a threat
so like prostates calm down for' yo ASS GET CHECKED(rofl, that's gross)
I CUTTHOATS now you back in the PITS*mtv reference*
cuz i put the BEATS on em in FL like i'm SAMPLIN KITS(yezzir)
in this battle you get SMASHED LIKE A CLIT, yeah life sucks
MY FUCK from last night is the BITCH YOU WIFED UP
In orlando, but my flow be yonkers
so you'll get LIT UP like fans lighters in BON JOVI CONCERTS
you'll need the lawyer that JACOBI sponsers, if that's the CASE
i'll blast ATCHA' FACE and make em GO SEE DOCTORS
ya baby shake when i pipe, like a rattle
now stop 'UPPIN' yourself like you RISING THE BATTLE

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...366/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...287/index.html

[Naive]

You don't want to battle me Wise. I can KO you or Arch, either or. doesn't make me a diff. I just like how you're not a "boring battler". But, you actually bring flare before you get demolished. it's noble.

Listen..

I took part in this battle, just to show I'm an honest guy.
And have Wise cop a KO, quicker than police in homicide.
Lets get to the chase, you're the only bitch in this place.
We all know Mr. Wise tailor-made just for a spit in the face.
I don't like your work, bitch. - nothing you do is worth it.
I could double post garbage & it's still more than enough for ya verses.
No need for creativity, I'll come straight and correct.
And still get the W, since ya punches never make sense or connect.
It's not an honor to be against dude.
cause Wise, everyone you got KO'd by used Keys against you.
So, it just goes to show you not worth the fight.
I could tip a bitch for ya sake, she'd still say you're not worth a night.
The next time you wanna battle, be careful seekin opponents.
It's not smart, callin out the same guys who got ya critiquin' ya own shit.
If this verse is weak.. fuck it, I shouldn't have began
And I just beat you with a half-assed verse that fell off in the end.

[Naive]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...378/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...374/index.html

[Brainsick]

nothing

vs

Lets get to the chase, you're the only bitch in this place.
We all know Mr. Wise tailor-made just for a spit in the face.

Wise didn't have anything worth quoting imo you were too concentrated on rhyming. I'm guessing naives verse was half assed but clearly did enough to win here

v/ Naive

[WiseInfidel]

high five

[WiseInfidel]

uppity

[Naive]

Anyone (ups).

[Mimic]

nothing

vs

I took part in this battle, just to show I'm an honest guy.
And have Wise cop a KO, quicker than police in homicide.

okay fairly straight forward, i didn't like anything Wise had, i think he needs to drop all thos capital letters lol, but word, Naive came more sheeker and cleaner..

V/Naive

can you Rtf on my Clockwise battle now please duke

[WiseInfidel]

top

[oatmeal]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...599/index.html

^^hit that, please

Wise Infidel:

I SPIT SHELLS like SUNFLOWER SEEDS
Like muslims lifting weight you 'UP DOWN' ON YOUR KNEES

not a bad concept, wording was off though

you wanna war come out here with me, i SMASH VETS
if CATS fret, insides come out like FLOWERING SEEDS
ME? I OVERPOWER MCS, this cats a threat
so like prostates calm down for' yo ASS GET CHECKED(rofl, that's gross)

concept was ok, a little on the played side, but the wording in this section was off, too. be more direct, don't ramble on so much to throw in a rhyme

I CUTTHOATS now you back in the PITS*mtv reference*
cuz i put the BEATS on em in FL like i'm SAMPLIN KITS(yezzir)

this was pretty good

in this battle you get SMASHED LIKE A CLIT, yeah life sucks
MY FUCK from last night is the BITCH YOU WIFED UP

lol, simple but funny

In orlando, but my flow be yonkers
so you'll get LIT UP like fans lighters in BON JOVI CONCERTS

made me laugh, decent punch

you'll need the lawyer that JACOBI sponsers, if that's the CASE
i'll blast ATCHA' FACE and make em GO SEE DOCTORS
ya baby shake when i pipe, like a rattle
now stop 'UPPIN' yourself like you RISING THE BATTLE

kinda played, poor wording again


Naive:
I took part in this battle, just to show I'm an honest guy.
And have Wise cop a KO, quicker than police in homicide.

not feeling this

Lets get to the chase, you're the only bitch in this place.
We all know Mr. Wise tailor-made just for a spit in the face.

ok

I don't like your work, bitch. - nothing you do is worth it.
I could double post garbage & it's still more than enough for ya verses.

not bad

No need for creativity, I'll come straight and correct.
And still get the W, since ya punches never make sense or connect.

lol, simple but effective

It's not an honor to be against dude.
cause Wise, everyone you got KO'd by used Keys against you.

same as above

So, it just goes to show you not worth the fight.
I could tip a bitch for ya sake, she'd still say you're not worth a night.

eh

The next time you wanna battle, be careful seekin opponents.
It's not smart, callin out the same guys who got ya critiquin' ya own shit.

lol, good

If this verse is weak.. fuck it, I shouldn't have began
And I just beat you with a half-assed verse that fell off in the end.

funny


Vote: Naive got this easy, way more direct and clever with his lines.

[oatmeal]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...599/index.html

might have missed this

[Travistee]

I SPIT SHELLS like SUNFLOWER SEEDS
Like muslims lifting weight you 'UP DOWN' ON YOUR KNEES
not bad

you wanna war come out here with me, i SMASH VETS
if CATS fret, insides come out like FLOWERING SEEDS
ehhhh

ME? I OVERPOWER MCS, this cats a threat
so like prostates calm down for' yo ASS GET CHECKED(rofl, that's gross)
lol a bit played but funny

I CUTTHOATS now you back in the PITS*mtv reference*
cuz i put the BEATS on em in FL like i'm SAMPLIN KITS(yezzir)
pretty good

in this battle you get SMASHED LIKE A CLIT, yeah life sucks
MY FUCK from last night is the BITCH YOU WIFED UP
meh

In orlando, but my flow be yonkers
so you'll get LIT UP like fans lighters in BON JOVI CONCERTS
was ok

you'll need the lawyer that JACOBI sponsers, if that's the CASE
i'll blast ATCHA' FACE and make em GO SEE DOCTORS
nahh

ya baby shake when i pipe, like a rattle
now stop 'UPPIN' yourself like you RISING THE BATTLE
uhhh this was ok to me not great but not terrible

vs

I took part in this battle, just to show I'm an honest guy.
And have Wise cop a KO, quicker than police in homicide.
not bad

Lets get to the chase, you're the only bitch in this place.
We all know Mr. Wise tailor-made just for a spit in the face.
eh

I don't like your work, bitch. - nothing you do is worth it.
I could double post garbage & it's still more than enough for ya verses.
decent

No need for creativity, I'll come straight and correct.
And still get the W, since ya punches never make sense or connect.
again meh

It's not an honor to be against dude.
cause Wise, everyone you got KO'd by used Keys against you.
ok

So, it just goes to show you not worth the fight.
I could tip a bitch for ya sake, she'd still say you're not worth a night.
nah

The next time you wanna battle, be careful seekin opponents.
It's not smart, callin out the same guys who got ya critiquin' ya own shit.
lol

If this verse is weak.. fuck it, I shouldn't have began
And I just beat you with a half-assed verse that fell off in the end.
bad closer

I thought this was closer than the previous votes made it out to be, but ima go with naive for a cleaner verse

V-Naive

[Naive]

ups.