Naive Vs Verbal

[V.A]

10 lines 1 hour
check in

[V.A]

check

[Naive]

yup ..

[V.A]

Rhymes left behind, too busy Being Soft, Lotion Mixed With Cronic
Riddle House My Ass, Naive's Best Line Is Tossed, Must of Forgot it
Cut The Cord On This Bitch Like Electronics, So He Cant Even Speak
Sophisticated My Ass, Stop Being Child like, And Just Be Naive
Kid Is Straight Trash, And Im Speaking Up For This Vomit
Playing Rap Like Tag But, This Kids Punches Are Still "NOT It"
This is Mr. Assault In The FL With A Duster, Cleaning This Dude
Even With Colonel Mustards Hint, This Kid Couldn't Get The W
This Is Game Time Homie, Dice Came Out, So Its Fire In The Hole
Id Monopilize Your Whole Crew But, Naive Is Still Yet To Pass Go

[Naive]

quick key,

V is a bitch. whoever said his bars was garbage is right.
You're a total waste cuz being awful's just a part of ya life.
This kid just a lame bitch. droppin artless - plain shit.
His disses so fragile it's looking like a counterpart of brainsicks.
why take time to write, cause to go in on this peasant..
would lead him to believe he's actually WORTH the moment or seconds.
This dude raped! smack him up, leave V wit a black/blue face.
cause when this male boxes, you start to NOTICE a fruit cake!
wait. just so ya know, you're unoriginal and wack.
and you prolly come weak in this battle, but how original is that?


blah

[FrankV]

Kid Is Straight Trash, And Im Speaking Up For This Vomit
Playing Rap Like Tag But, This Kids Punches Are Still "NOT It"

vs

why take time to write, cause to go in on this peasant..
would lead him to believe he's actually WORTH the moment or seconds.

close battle..both had alot of misses..
naive had a good setups but failed with his overall punch
with that said v/: verbal ...for more attempts
hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...448/index.html

[Alyse Miller]

this battle was weak.. both seemed keyed i hate keyed verses it make it seem like you dont give a fuck.. but really you should learn to not do that it makes it wack to read or vote on but overral this was close as hell naive i wasnt really feeling much in your verse but you had at least 1 hit but it was weak, verbal same for you but yours seemed alot more harder.

vote va

[HomicideKing]

can both you please go vote on my 3 open battles since i took time to vote on yours thanks


Rhymes left behind, too busy Being Soft, Lotion Mixed With Cronic
Riddle House My Ass, Naive's Best Line Is Tossed, Must of Forgot it
1/5
Cut The Cord On This Bitch Like Electronics, So He Cant Even Speak
Sophisticated My Ass, Stop Being Child like, And Just Be Naive
1/5
Kid Is Straight Trash, And Im Speaking Up For This Vomit
Playing Rap Like Tag But, This Kids Punches Are Still "NOT It"
3/5
This is Mr. Assault In The FL With A Duster, Cleaning This Dude
Even With Colonel Mustards Hint, This Kid Couldn't Get The W
1/5
This Is Game Time Homie, Dice Came Out, So Its Fire In The Hole
Id Monopilize Your Whole Crew But, Naive Is Still Yet To Pass Go
2/5 meh 8 total


V is a bitch. whoever said his bars was garbage is right.
You're a total waste cuz being awful's just a part of ya life.
2/5
This kid just a lame bitch. droppin artless - plain shit.
His disses so fragile it's looking like a counterpart of brainsicks.
3/5 multi's
why take time to write, cause to go in on this peasant..
would lead him to believe he's actually WORTH the moment or seconds.
3/5 for the tie
This dude raped! smack him up, leave V wit a black/blue face.
cause when this male boxes, you start to NOTICE a fruit cake!
2/5 for the win vote naive
wait. just so ya know, you're unoriginal and wack.
and you prolly come weak in this battle, but how original is that?

[the specialist]

Not To Bad Of a Battle...

V.A...From Te Opening To The Name Flip Bar Seemed Off...Forced...I Can Go Wit The Custard Concept...Needs Polishin Up...The Ending As Well...Basic Ideas And Concepts...

Naive...Thought You Came In Ok...Avg...Then Maintained That Throught...Punches Came Across...But Nothing Stood Out...Thought The Moment/Second Bar Was Ya Best Bar...

So

Vote/Naive...Avg Verse..But In This Battle...Avg Is Best...

I Have Spoken...

[The Incredible Hulk]

2 links please...

you both have 24 hours and if one of you hasn't done it by then the other will get the win, if BOTH haven't dropped 2 links each then my vote will decide the winner.

[The Incredible Hulk]

No links.?

V/ Naive for better punches and a more direct verse

closed.