Free topic.
18-30 lines.
Due next Friday.
Thanks Brandon Cee and SS for hosting this crew battle.
Free topic.
18-30 lines.
Due next Friday.
Thanks Brandon Cee and SS for hosting this crew battle.
Check.
yep.
Seeing past the walls, and her mind felt weak,
it was never her fault, but the candle wouldn't speak.
She had forgotten how to talk, and then how to see,
so whenever the lord called, her ears would never ring.
Picking flowers from the field, unaware of the colour,
she'd scavenged the daffodils, and then some others.
Her nose would inhale the pollen, it'd tingle and burn,
she thought she heard a Robin, or maybe not a bird.
A sneeze that echoed through the calmest plains,
louder than the flow of Poseiden's strongest waves.
The sky churned grey, 'guess it's time to run home,'
sad how such a beautiful day can immediately turn to stone.
She opens the front gate, stares toward the window,
but couldn't possibly pay attention to the red glow.
Stopped a few feet ahead, and fell to both knees,
she could hear each death of her whole family.
She knew almost immediately what happened inside,
when the smell of gasoline started to water her eyes.
Her father paid a visit, and killed everyone in sight,
the two children, and the one he once called his wife.
She was lucky to live, or so you would think,
but through a sixth sense, that day haunts her dreams.
Even if she was already blinded so long ago...
Puppets Demise
By: Novade
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Listen:
Broadcasting live from the banks where the memories wade
As the image, sculpted vividly, through centuries fades
The center replaced with remnants of the sand and the wind
Behind the chisel of the artist sits a man with a grin
The candles are dim, pathetic fallacy had set the tone
On a calm, dark night sufficient to be left alone
For ages this incurred, each divot marks a steppin' stone
Pensive, capturing life with the steady pace of a metronome
With each moment, inner peace, his focus would increase
Whimsical, there's no motive save for emotional release
The stroke of the brush, the suede was sewn to fit the frame
Beheld his masterpiece in awe and, in an instant, picked a name
And that's when it happened...
The eyes reddened with a penetrating gaze
The expression on the face changed, demonstrating hate
That moment the wind shifted, rain collided with the surface
His project absorbed the essence of the life he had exerted
As the puppet maker withered away an age began
In which a monster was unleashed and it devastated man
The rogue puppet soul apprehender, humanity's crutch
Lockin' your family up, panicking 'til their sanity's crushed
Mind of madness, a walking slasher picture with a twist
Due to his stature there's, assumed, a hidden figure with a grip
Though Godly as he was you can't deny the presence - Of the
power wired through dimensions to the man behind the menace
When the true manipulator was unveiled then allegiance was sworn
Towards the fabled Godslayer, Ender Khryst, the Breather of Storms
and so it ends..
Ready for Votes! If you haven't battled in SS before, then don't vote.
a week without votes. smh.
i was in SS for one week, can i vote?
Vote, I don't give a fuck WHO you are. As long as you post a reasonable explanation for your vote and good feedback on both pieces. I'm perfectly happy.
close call, both pretty even in ability i reckon... ima vote dagel cos he's in the same crew lmao, just kidding lol...
im undecided so ill read 'em both again when im more srt8 headed and vote...
therres too much sleeping goin on
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1-0 in votes.. and Novade was exposed as a biter so this piece is PROBABLY bitten...
Scytsophrenia wins this battle, and the crew battle.
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