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    'in my cup'

    'in my cup' is the name of the free DL beat im writing this too, not sure what i'd call it yet. any feedback is much appreciated

    (the beat was: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...songID=8369285 )

    link1: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...05&postcount=2

    link2: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...51&postcount=3

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    we can choose not to cheat, speaking realistically,
    only writing me into these beats
    beating down MCs streaking like heat
    ill like music you would never delete

    not toppin the charts, stuck in the penitentiary
    doing time for art like the rappers we was meant to be,
    not quite fakers, not made by labels,
    not ready to forsake the days that done shaped us

    then you get the other side, boys that dont love the rhyme,
    poised with their voices just lookin to earn a dime,
    clearly they dont write, they just pay for time,
    reading, on the mic, reciting someone's else's lines

    or they just pretend, to be the boys that send,
    lead into heads, wannabe gangsters who
    wanna be men, honourary rappers, like
    hen-ry's goal, meaning not at all


    chorus

    when i say rap i dont mean dupli-
    caaa - tion,
    and i dont mean wrap as in suffo-
    caaa - tion
    cause you're choking the game with your despe-
    raaa - tion while i take
    time with my rhymes knock you out e-li-mi-
    naaa - tion



    hope you dont mind my pointed lines,
    it's just a sign of these goddamn times,
    a reminder that anyone rhymes,
    there's websites for it, and anyone can type,

    but have priide in it, confiiide in it,
    take tiime, make yourself shiiine in it,
    and your rap'll become, what capsicums
    do to food, yeah it'll put spiice in it

    meanwhile i just, turn on my apple book, open up,
    logic pro, bring out, my mic, get set go!
    drop sets for, my cities that i rep for,
    the one that i left, and the one thats next-door

    so i wrestle, and give it my best-all,
    seal it with real lyrics, and dress it up,
    deal it to people who feel it, hopin they listen,
    creep into your brains, cause my lyrics they glisten


    chorus

    when i say rap i dont mean dupli-
    caaa - tion,
    and i dont mean wrap as in suffo-
    caaa - tion
    cause you're choking the game with your despe-
    raaa - tion while i take
    time with my rhymes knock you out e-li-mi-
    naaa - tion


    theres too many rappers who just pick up a mic,
    act like every night they're in gun-fights,
    so the public mind goes, 'pff, thats trite',
    so they turn away, and the real writers die

    but despite the reliability of people to lie
    the game respires never dies, always thrives,
    cuz when people are tired, they can find peace of mind,
    we reach-'em through rhyme, give 'em respite from daily life,

    and they feel that we try, so they reel in our vibes,
    treat-it like fire, warm their feet up beside it,
    so-when-you feelin' like crying,put in a CD and drive,
    let our heat melt the ice, the melody to your life

    the goal is to show a road only we know,
    whether of hope, or-a dark dome without soul,
    whether to ease the load or increase it more
    this is hip-hop, strength straight from the flow,
    Last edited by nish81; December 20th, 2009 at 07:26 PM

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    Re: 'in my cup'

    This is the best drop i've seen from you.
    I like this. Very overused topic. So I dislike the originality.
    But Your a strait dope artist. Keep dropping.
    My favorite bars are deff.:
    and they feel that we try, so they reel in our vibes,
    treat-it like fire, warm their feet up beside it,
    so-when-you feelin' like crying,put in a CD and drive,
    let our heat melt the ice, the melody to your life
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    Re: 'in my cup'

    thanks for the feed man, i appreciate that you like it especially since your own drop was pretty dope lol

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    Re: 'in my cup'

    [QUOTE]theres too many rappers who just pick up a mic,
    act like every night they're in gun-fights,
    so the public mind goes, 'pff, thats trite',
    so they turn away, and the real writers die/QUOTE]

    so true. but i can't say much considering i lack originality myself.
    but i like it, it was a long post, with a topic that is used commonly, but you did it well.
    i like your lyrics, it'd be nicer to know what the beat was, but overall it's good bro.

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    Re: 'in my cup'

    uppin

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    Re: 'in my cup'

    kinda heartfelt i also realize it was coming from somewhere else other then just a pad of keys but a stronge imagination from a very determined writer = ) i like your flow it was very settled and nice and real on my behalf not many rap about things meaningful now so this was a major thumbs up 6.5
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    Re: 'in my cup'

    thanks for the comment, appreciate the feedback

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    Re: 'in my cup'

    one..last..bump(!)

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