10 lines
due in an hour
Big_Ben
jackel
10 lines
due in an hour
check
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these 10 lines are due in an hour, but ill drop em in 10,
you must be delusional fukin with big ben,
jackel, do you evan know how to use a pen,
cos ya raps sound like scribbles,
when i release my furious raps i start to dribble,
fiddle n riddle, ya end has come,
or should i say ya bak end has cum in it ya fukin pooof,
give up gay prostitution n go back to readin books,
i hang with crims n crooks, n here in melbourne you will get exposed,
now that your done, more time for me n ya girl to get together with no clothes
my fist will mess your face up ill have it drippin blood like a puddle
you wouldn't be big..................... even if you won American idol
im really grateful i get a free win against this spastic
we can see big headed...into oncoming traffic
ill kick this turd in the mangina but i don't know when
voters will think i stopped time...when i pull cogs outta big ben
my guns rapidly spit cells from your brain and erase your memory
but we all know there ain't nothing to hit...cause your skull's empty
your a pathetic queer that would get more arse than a seat
i heard at hells gate u tried ur moves on satan...and even he got cold feet
i don't have a girl im 13
i know im not ment too, but im gunna drop a bit more,
cos im not american you fukin dick whore,
i rep australia,
n when i make it big time ill be shure to mail ya,
n why would i try moves on my own father, satan?,
just shut ya fukin mouth cos evryone here knows ya fakin
yer thats it n i dont care if that doesnt count,
oh n to reply to ur msg, no you cant cover my dick with your mouth.
first off you are not alowwed to do what u just did it results in a dq..but i will let it slide..second im from australia too lol and third cover your dick with my mouth? sorry man but if u want a 13 yr old to suck your dick i think u have problems! but anyway just let people vote ok!
not a great battle here
bigben came too basic, no real punches
just a bunch of statements, needa work on that
Jackel werent much better, but had better attempts
at punches n just was better all round
v/ jackel
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bump leave links i will rtf
why the fuck did you ask someone to set this up for you if it already was?
big_ben
these 10 lines are due in an hour, but ill drop em in 10,
you must be delusional fukin with big ben,
eh. 1/5
jackel, do you evan know how to use a pen,
cos ya raps sound like scribbles,
nah. 1/5
when i release my furious raps i start to dribble,
fiddle n riddle, ya end has come,
ok... 1/5
or should i say ya bak end has cum in it ya fukin pooof,
give up gay prostitution n go back to readin books,
meh. 1/5
i hang with crims n crooks, n here in melbourne you will get exposed,
now that your done, more time for me n ya girl to get together with no clothes
nah. 1/5
big_ben 5/25
jackel
my fist will mess your face up ill have it drippin blood like a puddle
you wouldn't be big..................... even if you won American idol
ok. 2/5
im really grateful i get a free win against this spastic
we can see big headed...into oncoming traffic
nice. 2/5
ill kick this turd in the mangina but i don't know when
voters will think i stopped time...when i pull cogs outta big ben
alright. 2/5
my guns rapidly spit cells from your brain and erase your memory
but we all know there ain't nothing to hit...cause your skull's empty
ok. 2/5
your a pathetic queer that would get more arse than a seat
i heard at hells gate u tried ur moves on satan...and even he got cold feet
lol. 2/5
jackel - 10/25
Overall - jackel came with punches and big_ben just didn't hit with any, you have the rhymes bro now just get creative.
Vote - jackel
Please...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=411945
I normally would disect the rhymes but this battle was clearly a land slide
vote:: jackal
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...915/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...951/index.html
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big ben you need to understand the concepts of battling and all like basic punches and multis and similies and metaphors and personal and name play (--- once u master any 1 u'll be much better but its like u had like a cypher or open mic verse to me didnt seem to fit for battling work on it and keep trying
jack u had attemps at punches and some or most was weak or fail when trying to deliever them ur set up are ok but work on that to
vote: jack
can't really vote because jack's wit T.R.A.P, but most def a landslide win in his favor
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