Yo man, 10 lines, due whenever really. As long as you drop bro
G'luck
Yo man, 10 lines, due whenever really. As long as you drop bro
G'luck
battling me, your gonna fail just as bad as your OM's do
guilty conscience is understandable...
...............Considering the shit read you put us through
Firing personals at your crumby OM's bitch you could probably call me calous
Sure your last got a couple hits... But only cuz we wanted to read Vallus
Shit i'm dropping thunderstorms ripping shit up and destroying ya crap
and the sound of my lightnin'... Is the closest you'll get to a crack
Shit noob faggot this battle is gonna be mine with ease
25th win opens up my award showcase... so in 2 senses this verse is keyed
If this faggots gets girls they must be the fat, nerdy wierdo types
He loves it when they look at him... Shame its through 4 eyes
alllriighttyy..
D's set ups are the same as his punches,always lack with connection
cuz quoting a dope bar from you is unheard of & never actually mentioned
so reconsider the fact that your texten..should quit now,your fucking pitiful dude
because the L you took to VH in the 1-2 was embarrassing & also pivotal proof
shit dude,your drops elevating?yah..when his queerness has arisedOriginally Posted by Divine Intervention
that's all due to the fact when he was younger,he liked to experiment with guys
that's a shame dude,just like your FL title win due to the lack of experience
of the voters..cuz ovb/they where on the same lvl as your bars..whack & delirious
its a fact in the clearest sense,your concepts are ancient & in need of rewording
should work for the green party the way ya bars seem recycled,repeated & boring
DON'T GET THE PERSONALS/WP/PUNCHES.. DON'T VOTE!
DI
1. ok
2. ok
3. no
4. nice
5. simplest thing ive ever seen from you
Links
1. weak attempt at punch
2. personal but it aint hitting hard
3. no concept couldve been great but you worded it terribly
4. ok
5. meh
Link step up your punches. your insulting him which is good its just not clever. rather simple.
v/DI
battling me, your gonna fail just as bad as your OM's do
guilty conscience is understandable...
...............Considering the shit read you put us through
-good opener
Firing personals at your crumby OM's bitch you could probably call me calous
Sure your last got a couple hits... But only cuz we wanted to read Vallus
-good
Shit i'm dropping thunderstorms ripping shit up and destroying ya crap
and the sound of my lightnin'... Is the closest you'll get to a crack
-oK..
Shit noob faggot this battle is gonna be mine with ease
25th win opens up my award showcase... so in 2 senses this verse is keyed
-eh.. Kinda stretched
If this faggots gets girls they must be the fat, nerdy wierdo types
He loves it when they look at him... Shame its through 4 eyes
-decent closer.. Nice drop.. Nothing bad except the stretched bar.. It would have been more good but I just wasn't feelin it.. Nice drop overall..
Links
D's set ups are the same as his punches,always lack with connection
cuz quoting a dope bar from you is
unheard of & never actually mentioned
-ehh..
so reconsider the fact that your texten..should quit now,your fucking pitiful dude
because the L you took to VH in the 1-2 was embarrassing & also pivotal proof
-good.. stretched though..
shit dude,your drops elevating?yah..when his queerness has arised
that's all due to the fact when he was younger,he liked to experiment with guys
-k
that's a shame dude,just like your FL title win due to the lack of experience
of the voters..cuz ovb/they where on the same lvl as your bars..whack & delirious
-nice
its a fact in the clearest sense,your concepts are ancient & in need of rewording
should work for the green party the way ya bars seem recycled,repeated & boring
-ok closer.. Nice drop overall.. Had some stretched bars.. And a weak bar here and there.. But all together.. It wouldve beat anyone BUT Divine
great battle guys.. Best I've seen in a while :P.. Both came hard.. Good punches.. I'll say that DI edged this one out because he flowed better, and had more wit in his concepts.. And like I said L1nks.. You coudlve beaten anyone but DI.. This kids on fire right now.. iight yall.. I'll post my link so you know what to do =).. haha peace out..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...52/index.html
For years there's been surprise horses in this stable
Just 6 wins in, I'm the realest nigga on this label
1. It wasn't setup all that great, the punch was okay but could have been worded better.
2. Setup was bad, wasn't feeling the punch to be honest. it just didn't hit hard it was too statement'ish, it's maybe okish at best.
3. Nah, bad bar overall.
4. Self glory.
5. This is probably one of the worst bars I've ever seen you post, lol... no joke.
Vs.
1. Setup was weak, punch was blah.
2. Setup well, punch was kind of bland but okay.
3. Setup was meh, could have flipped this quote wayyy better but it's decent for what it is.
4. Again, concept had alot of potential but it wasn't executed that great but it's okay.
5. Played concept.
Comments: DI I'm surprised as hell, I can't believe you just won the FL title and you dropped this weak. Seriously...Fuck were you thinking? This looks like you put no effort into at all. Maybe two okay bars at most but your last two, second last one was some shit you'd see in an open mic and the last line didn't even rhyme. Links, you didn't have the best verse either but you had a few good concepts, could have been executed better though.
V/ Links for come harder and more consistent.
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..Distinct Advantage..
thnx for the votes..
upping.
Upping
meh...
don't want to put a new head over u man but u leave me no choice
vote - L1nks
DI....your bars either lacked a good concept for a diss or they where
just not worded well....you structure was good and scheme was solid
but you have wording issues where your flow is not that polished
and the concept is not that hard hitting at all...I liked the Vallus line
but overall...you could have been more creative dissing his OM
that stuff about the arcade was just self glory...L1nks came pretty
consistant...a few mehish concepts but they where decent overall
the pivotal line was my fav...overall he came more consistant
with more creativeness and more polish overall with his wording and wit
stay up u two...^
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battling me, your gonna fail just as bad as your OM's do
guilty conscience is understandable...
...............Considering the shit read you put us through
lol, good bar...nice personal...
Firing personals at your crumby OM's bitch you could probably call me calous
Sure your last got a couple hits... But only cuz we wanted to read Vallus
same concept as the first one but flipped, still good...
Shit i'm dropping thunderstorms ripping shit up and destroying ya crap
and the sound of my lightnin'... Is the closest you'll get to a crack
absolutely not...
Shit noob faggot this battle is gonna be mine with ease
25th win opens up my award showcase... so in 2 senses this verse is keyed
Swag bar, self glory...and whack...
If this faggots gets girls they must be the fat, nerdy wierdo types
He loves it when they look at him... Shame its through 4 eyes
oh wow no...what were you thinking
VS
D's set ups are the same as his punches,always lack with connection
cuz quoting a dope bar from you is unheard of & never actually mentioned
no...concept is played the fuck out and there really was no punch here...
so reconsider the fact that your texten..should quit now,your fucking pitiful dude
because the L you took to VH in the 1-2 was embarrassing & also pivotal proof
naa, you could've made this better with a flip on VH's name and his loss tied into it...but your wording killed it, cool concept but didn't connect...
shit dude,your drops elevating?yah..when his queerness has arised
that's all due to the fact when he was younger,he liked to experiment with guys
lol! Dopest bar of the battle right here...niceness...
that's a shame dude,just like your FL title win due to the lack of experience
of the voters..cuz ovb/they where on the same lvl as your bars..whack & delirious
naa...this could've been good too but your execution was horrible, I like the set up and the way you got the 2 lines continueing what you were saying but the execution was garbage, therefore this didn't hit...
its a fact in the clearest sense,your concepts are ancient & in need of rewording
should work for the green party the way ya bars seem recycled,repeated & boring
absolutely not, sir...this is played as fuck and you flipped it horribly...
Well, I got DI winning this one by 1 bar, he dropped 2 good personal/punches, although they used the same concept, they were still enough to beat L1nks 1 personal/punch, consistency...if L1nks would've dropped 1 more good punch, he would've took this battle...but as it stands, he only has 1 good punch/personal in his entire verse, and DI had 2...therefore...
Vote = DI
Now I am become death; destroyer of worlds.
battling me, your gonna fail just as bad as your OM's do
guilty conscience is understandable...
...............Considering the shit read you put us through
Lol good opener
Firing personals at your crumby OM's bitch you could probably call me calous
Sure your last got a couple hits... But only cuz we wanted to read Vallus
Ok
Shit i'm dropping thunderstorms ripping shit up and destroying ya crap
and the sound of my lightnin'... Is the closest you'll get to a crack
Naw
Shit noob faggot this battle is gonna be mine with ease
25th win opens up my award showcase... so in 2 senses this verse is keyed
Cool but self glory...
If this faggots gets girls they must be the fat, nerdy wierdo types
He loves it when they look at him... Shame its through 4 eyes
no way
D's set ups are the same as his punches,always lack with connection
cuz quoting a dope bar from you is unheard of & never actually mentioned
played
so reconsider the fact that your texten..should quit now,your fucking pitiful dude
because the L you took to VH in the 1-2 was embarrassing & also pivotal proof
Decent
shit dude,your drops elevating?yah..when his queerness has arised
that's all due to the fact when he was younger,he liked to experiment with guys
lol nice
that's a shame dude,just like your FL title win due to the lack of experience
of the voters..cuz ovb/they where on the same lvl as your bars..whack & delirious
no
its a fact in the clearest sense,your concepts are ancient & in need of rewording
should work for the green party the way ya bars seem recycled,repeated & boring
no
It seems like DI didn't try to hard here, the closer was pretty bad man but your first two bars won it for you
Vote = DI
hmm. Upping
DI i think the concepts matched fairly well too the flow i think the punches were better because they were personal and in any case i prefer personals rather than funny fucker lines anyday...
L1nk i think your bars were more basic and simple lacked in flow and punches not that they wern't there just that you didn't connect the direction evenley...
So my vote goes to
\\//ote:: DI
“Why am I fighting to live, if I'm just living to fight
Why am I trying to see,
when there aint nothing in sight
Why am I trying to give, when no one gives me a try
Why am I dying to live, if I'm just living to die?"
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