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    Available: Spacious Room

    *Rough draft, I couldn't sleep.. it's an idea i've had for a while.

    Take a look in the window of her heart, nothing but a vacant space.
    Inhabited once before, but he only cased the place.
    She’s playing it safe. Damned if another mother fucker makes her break;
    Slick bitch’ll give you a piece of the pie, but won’t let you take the cake.

    For appearances’ sake, she acts like without him, she’s doing better.
    She’d forget his existence if the memories would just let her.
    Trying to censor every thought she has, that has his presence in it.
    Can’t see through her hearts’ pain, because the window is tinted.

    Broad’s far from timid, puts up her guard, but it’s only an image.
    A real estate salesman gimmick, all rules applied are only contingent.
    And now she’s in it… market’s not the best, lost it all so she has little to invest.
    Undress, multiple leasees, finding the quickest way to their hearts’ through their chests’.
    Regrets. Every night she comes, happy, but come morning leaves upset.
    You can’t dwell in her heart, but for a night, she’ll lease it to you to rest.

    It’s been forever since he left, but she still battles to get him out her system.
    On a mission; trying every single position, just to forget him.
    She likes the attention, from the many men, but she’s wasting their time.
    Searching for something more with her, but there’s nothing to find.
    Try to move in with their emotions, they’re evicted and she’ll keep any heart that’s left behind.
    Wait in line; maybe one day that vacant space will showcase a “for rent” sign.


    AVAILABLE: Spacious room in the "heart" of Jane (just inside the chest cavity, other surrounding organs within minutes), connected to high speed blood-stream and close to good schools . Vacant, last occupant took everything, including memories & fixtures, but left old plumbing which works just fine pumping blood throughout complex. Leaky windows (getting it fixed by optometrist), bore a hole in the frontal cortex where happiness use to be, fragile feelings due to broken foundation, and fucker shit on the rug... Beautiful fixer-uper!! Hurry, before this puppy goes!
    Last edited by binbizzywitshit; December 22nd, 2008 at 04:36 PM

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    "All men seek happiness. This is the motive of everyone, even of those who hang themselves."
    -B. Pascal

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