Westcoast Mentality
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A requested beat. Has a westcoast vibe to it. Check it out.
Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...on-375966.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ee-375969.html
Westcoast Mentality
[SOUNDCLICK]6834016[/soundclick]
A requested beat. Has a westcoast vibe to it. Check it out.
Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...on-375966.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ee-375969.html
You defrinetly had the right idea with this,
could be very catchy... but its too simple homey...
all ure instruments sound way to consistant.. it begins to sound bland...
just gas it up and it'll have the right feel.
And to add you did well with the whole westcoast feel, Kudos for that.
Tell me, Do you Bleed?
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You Will.
What's a Kudo? lol...
Thanks for feed. Yeah, I'm trying keep all my beats real simplistic, and clean. I use to have a problem of doing too much and leaving no room for the artist.
Honestly I dont knwo what Kudo is... i think its a greek word for props... i knwo it means props....
But i undertsand that... but dont make it so that your beat loses all its "FLAVOR",
Dont make it simplistic enough that someone can imitate the beat,
By the Way im about to post one of my latest today... So RTF when you get a chance.
Tell me, Do you Bleed?
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You Will.
^Will do, thanks.
work on your quantizin for west coast tracks, cuz they have a later drum program then just straight up 1/16 notes...also the drums are supposed to bounce and hit hard...in hip hop (especially westcoast beats), the drums drive the track...so work on your compression...seriously homie theres alot more to production then just pushin some keys and tweakin shit...
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Up Against the Wind
^I don't know what you mean by straight up 1/16 notes... sorry, please explain. Damn but my kick, I thought it fit perfectly and bumped, if I turn up the bass to the kick, it starts to sound distorted with bassline.
I need some tutoring besides listening to other artists work. (been doing that) Someone should teach me.
Oh yea, I'ma fix bassline, sounds weird.
Yeah your bassline sounds strangely out of tune
I know the idea you where going with this, but that bass octaves need to change, it sounds out of tune. Needa get a hold of some pianos for West Coast type beats, anyways man, good to see you still making beats, stay up bruh
RTF at: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...on-376269.html
Last edited by 10fingaz; August 27th, 2008 at 11:36 PM
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hey Pal.
sorry i aint get u the tag yet bro.
been a lil busy...hit me with ya email. ill send it off cos im not really on msn all the time.
this beat cool tho.
i dont like the bass line.
the high piano chords remind me of straight to the bank wen it first started.
wen u drop everything i dont like it.
but its cool..
It was alrigh thtough, beat was on point but I really didn't like it though, not really you bro.
At the start the bass sounds out of key. Like you should be higher up!
It does sound west coast style and I like the piano timing.
Just the bass. Everything else is good in my opinion.
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