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Thread: History Lesson, US is Screwed Up

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    MC Illest
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    History Lesson, US is Screwed Up

    Yo, i was in da mode and I just started spittin. Check it out


    Before terrorism, it was racism, black verse white
    MLK made his mark, altering the course of a black man's life
    Hitler killed the Jews, his thought were confused
    Satan made him invincible, he thought he couldn't lose
    He committed suicide, where as a few just cried
    But there was a greater evil, let's take a trip back in time
    Joseph Stalin was a thriller, he had an armor of a knight
    But his heart resembled a beast that killed everything in sight
    Had no knowledge of the tree of life, that was back before Christ
    Adam & Eve, the only humans and the Almighty Light
    Above, Jesus Christ, God and Creator of Earth
    Made air, trees blew, where the first humans were birthed
    Before church, which wasn't needed until A&E were decieved
    Satan's serpant told them to eat, and as humans, they believed
    Relieved im not in their same argueable situation
    Life is the same equation, but a whole new transformation
    Feet turned into cars, to big buses to planes
    Bush dealin wit situations out of his range
    Exchangin violence wit out brothers, thugs killin their mothers
    Every day, front page articles, but what about the others
    Sick homeless, aids carriers discriminated in society
    I commonly sip on champange forgettin who provide for me
    There's a variety of issues the US body is facin
    Cuz the government still tryin to walk on 2 feet without lacin


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    MC Illest
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    uppin fo' feedback

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    MC Illest
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    this is somethin real old, i've gotten better, but i was lookin through my drops and i noticed no one replied.......holla

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    Wow this is pretty old lol..but you need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.

    But this was alright i thought...your structure in this seemed pretty good i thought, could be touched up a bit though....your vocab was alright i thought...flow in this was alright, it stayed on through out the whole verse mostly, kinda fell off at points for me though....but overall this was alright. keep at it.

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