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Thread: "I'm so fucking Emo"

  1. January 13th, 2008, 09:21 PM #16
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    Re: "I'm so fucking Emo"

    Quote Originally Posted by Jonathon View Post
    until i step in..

    wtf happened to my shout out!? *killsself*

    oh well, nice piece, a little weird and not really a concept to it.. but overall it was decent.. you are working on the basics, and keep getting the basics to look nice and you can move on to bigger stuff.. and it'll turn into the snowball effect. keep writing dude, you have potential. keep reading pieces, and keep writing.. hopefully you'll be in SS someday
    I have alot of favorites......but this piece was inspired by an argument I had with Mariah and the rest of the inspiration from this piece came from an argument with thaumaturgy.......but yeah.....I'ma just make a piece for Jon called *Big Brother*......
    Last edited by Dayvid Aimz; January 13th, 2008 at 09:22 PM Reason: Jon said he was gon kill hisself*
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  2. January 13th, 2008, 09:29 PM #17
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    Re: "I'm so fucking Emo"

    this had great flow, but was random as hell for the most part. Decent multis and shit, overall cool.
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  3. January 14th, 2008, 01:43 AM #18
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    Re: "I'm so fucking Emo"

    Quote Originally Posted by Vincible View Post
    I have alot of favorites......but this piece was inspired by an argument I had with Mariah and the rest of the inspiration from this piece came from an argument with thaumaturgy.......but yeah.....I'ma just make a piece for Jon called *Big Brother*......
    That is so sweet..*sheds a tear*

    *thinks*









    *gets mad *

    Weres my piece lol.

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  4. January 14th, 2008, 08:04 AM #19
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    Re: "I'm so fucking Emo"

    Quote Originally Posted by Levathious.. View Post
    That is so sweet..*sheds a tear*

    *thinks*









    *gets mad *

    Weres my piece lol.
    Writing for me is like the biggest gift/curse ever......when I'm subliminal only engivale can understand who I'm disparaging/flattering.....when I use names everyone wants a personal piece......I'll see what I can do....LOLz
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  5. January 14th, 2008, 11:14 AM #20
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    Re: "I'm so fucking Emo"

    dope piece, man... flow was on point.. decent
    vocabulary.. alot of emotion.. you set your
    multi's up nicely.. also your wording.. sounds like
    you had some personal problems with some hip-hop
    heads on here.. released what you had inside out..
    straight from the heart type of shit.. how it should be..
    great job, man.. definitely talented..
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  6. January 14th, 2008, 11:39 AM #21
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    Re: "I'm so fucking Emo"

    thanks for the honest feeds.....I never expected anyone to like this piece........I was thinking about not writing ever again then I write this and y'all love its Guts.

    *grabs an old notebook and throws it across the room....reluctantly lets go of some self-loathing*
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