what it comes down to homie, that style is old news, and if you gonna do it you need hotter punch lines, they was weak, your vocab sounds like shit on the radio, yea true, and well . . . thats not a good thing. theres was no lead or topic, not even a vague focus point, and some of your punchlines had notin to do wit notin they just rhymed . . . i dont even like that style and i can kick it better than that