this was a good read, all of you took clever approaches and personified the seasons well.
great description i could almost feel each season as you described it
my only complaint is to the writer of summer, your verse came off a bit cliche, some lines seemed awkward like you were trying to squeeze pop material (namely the drug and self-glorification lines) into a poetic peice
other than that it was great
you tried something original and you pulled it off, good job
9/10