Wk/5 Ace of Aces(1-3) vs Daz(0-0)

[Chris Black]

Check in by Wednesday...or YOU LOSE! No exceptions...
At the time of check in drop the topic you wanna write about...
It can be about anything...this shit is about you, the person, you the writer...
What you have inside you that you wanna get out in written word.
Be it your shitty week, the story of you and your girl...
Your inner-most hatred, your ultimate adventure...
Whatever.
BUT MAKE SURE YOU LET YOUR TOPIC BE KNOWN AT TIME OF CHECK IN.
This is to reduce the chances of you waiting until the last minute...
Then posting up an old piece you wrote 3 years ago.
I REALLY hope you don't do shit like that...please write fresh, aight!

Maximum 36 lines...if you drop more, your opponent can request a DQ...
AND HE'LL GET IT! Please keep these verses fairly quick and easy to read.
That'll keep votes and interest going!

Due Friday, Midnight.

New Rule: Vote on three battles by midnight Sunday, pacific time. Edit the links into your check-ins. For every link missing, you lose a vote.

Also, people, refrain from editing your verse or editing your verse into a previous post. Make a new post for your verse & don't edit.

[Ace of Aces]

check in.

Missing You.

[Daz]

Im here

Oh shit..is you stil trynna do this aces?

[Daz]

Dear Blog,

Friends i haven't seen before im starting to see more of
i dont know if that's more problems or is it more love...?
a lot of snakes in the grass and im broke can't afford to cut it
that's why i gotta stay locked, close the doors to public
want money so i gotta think more republic
and if i can't deal with it i ignore the subject.
Fuck it.
Is it my fault that i learned about money from the crack game?
where niggaz put hundreds on crap games
Broken home, but i guess the cash glued it together
and yeah i might've lost a lot but i had music forever
Some niggaz rap for the fame, some niggaz do it for the cheddar
nigga i rap with all my pain, and truth up in these letters
Gimmie a chance and i can make an eight eleven
im so high i swear if i died i'd fly over the gates of heaven
keeps my mind clear
some dudes brave, others suffer from blind fear
afraid that their times near
just walk a a mile with me.
it's not that i fear death, it's that i fear mortality
i wanna swim inside the river of youth
Chuz all these haters wanna do is pull the trigger and shoot
where do i go when the rain stops?
my dull life requires a little paint shop
I can't do it.

[Ace of Aces]

sorry man i just couldn't make it on time this week.

[Born To Kill]

Daz WINS, 1-0
Ace of Aces LOSES, NO SHOW, 1-4
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