Wk/5 Tim(4-0) vs Rappertoire(3-0)

[Chris Black]

Check in by Wednesday...or YOU LOSE! No exceptions...
At the time of check in drop the topic you wanna write about...
It can be about anything...this shit is about you, the person, you the writer...
What you have inside you that you wanna get out in written word.
Be it your shitty week, the story of you and your girl...
Your inner-most hatred, your ultimate adventure...
Whatever.
BUT MAKE SURE YOU LET YOUR TOPIC BE KNOWN AT TIME OF CHECK IN.
This is to reduce the chances of you waiting until the last minute...
Then posting up an old piece you wrote 3 years ago.
I REALLY hope you don't do shit like that...please write fresh, aight!

Maximum 36 lines...if you drop more, your opponent can request a DQ...
AND HE'LL GET IT! Please keep these verses fairly quick and easy to read.
That'll keep votes and interest going!

Due Friday, Midnight.

New Rule: Vote on three battles by midnight Sunday, pacific time. Edit the links into your check-ins. For every link missing, you lose a vote.

Also, people, refrain from editing your verse or editing your verse into a previous post. Make a new post for your verse & don't edit.

[Tim]

checkin

topic :the jokes on you

[Erun.]

Yo

Topic: Mistaken Identity
or
Jokes on You

[Tim]

can i get a 24 hour extension?

[Erun.]

me too ...? I'll vote on every battle as a return of favor.

[Erun.]

Blah no show verse's are the tightest ones
ya know from bustin guns to gettin trusts n funds
Then i lust and sonned these worthless chums
Jokes on you cause i just won.......

sign me out plz. no time till after new years'.

[Born To Kill]

Double no show???

WTF???

And now, Rapper...that shit ain't a verse.

Tim...WTF, you're the man and all. WTF???
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Tim LOSES, NO SHOW, 4-1
Rappertoire LOSES, NO SHOW, 3-1
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