Week 7 -Licorice (1 - 3) Vs Elaborate (0 - 2)

[D.Silver]

LLL JR Rules

Check in - due Wednesday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Verses - due Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Voting - ends Sunday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
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No voting links
If you win the battle=no win added to your tally.
If you lose the battle=2 loses

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Gestures Rule
If in your battle you are not up by more then 2 votes when the battle is closed, the Deduction of votes for posting less then the min 5 links, will come into effect. Meaning if the votes deducted results in a lost for you, it will be Permanently Recorded.

Lines
Minimum 10 - Max 30
Match whoever drops first.

No Feeding, biting, recycling, bitching, or swaying

No Pics, unless agreed upon.

If you break any rules, you will be dealt with. Punishments will vary from each situation, so you could either get votes deducted from your battle or get booted from the League.

Good Luck to you both

[Taz™]

Check... im dropping 12

[Taz™]

fUk it..

Entwined by ur speech, The way u refine a cause to preach
Ur drop’s heartfelt, like love letter’s ,way it reminds of a bitch
Been bouncin around, like his position on his shin and chin is
For clean diss, E takes It back old skul, so he’s punches can b in this
wit the lines he have, cant blame peeps who rather be in rehab
Fuk a spot light, …. Even popo having difficulties locating E-labs
To bang this guy, dont get ur hopes up, thats w/ no slang in line
Ill cash in time, money don’t grow on trees, still E hangs on mine
Im quick to chase fortunes, for chicks to freak on too
E’s luck don’t stray…its gone, even a bitch wont stick on you
Ur a scam El, Dinning in clams is when u dropping damn shells
And if ur main is a noob, think the rest should speak for themselves


.12

[Elaborate.]

check

[Taz™]

1.) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...83#post5513283
2.) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326594
3.) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326607
4.) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326606
5.) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326613
6.) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326609
7.) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326611
8.) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326605
9.) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326603
10.)http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=326610

[Elaborate.]

Making my day, wat are u a Fake or a gay?,
plus rb’s 2 x better when we take u away,
im summin it up quick, the solutions ur shit,
& this pussies so bent he’s reduced to a prick,
Disputing ya spit, for tryin to evr doubt ur iller,
& We could make sandwiches with ur amount of filler,
Fuck personals, id only disclaim his career,
No wonder licor’s not stable, hes Named after beer,
All ur rhymes are messed up, but ill positively hit ya,
an re-an act jesus's death an cross u from the picture,
im writing with rage, with a lighting to gays,
fuck stage fright, he's so shit he frightans the stage,

[JDoe]

Entwined by ur speech, The way u refine a cause to preach
Ur drop’s heartfelt, like love letter’s ,way it reminds of a bitch
...does not rhyme...
Been bouncin around, like his position on his shin and chin is
For clean diss, E takes It back old skul, so he’s punches can b in this
nah
wit the lines he have, cant blame peeps who rather be in rehab
Fuk a spot light, …. Even popo having difficulties locating E-labs
nah
To bang this guy, dont get ur hopes up, thats w/ no slang in line
Ill cash in time, money don’t grow on trees, still E hangs on mine
ok
Im quick to chase fortunes, for chicks to freak on too
E’s luck don’t stray…its gone, even a bitch wont stick on you
nah
Ur a scam El, Dinning in clams is when u dropping damn shells
And if ur main is a noob, think the rest should speak for themselves
ok

vs.

Making my day, wat are u a Fake or a gay?,
plus rb’s 2 x better when we take u away,
ok
im summin it up quick, the solutions ur shit,
& this pussies so bent he’s reduced to a prick,
no
Disputing ya spit, for tryin to evr doubt ur iller,
& We could make sandwiches with ur amount of filler,
ok
Fuck personals, id only disclaim his career,
No wonder licor’s not stable, hes Named after beer,
no
All ur rhymes are messed up, but ill positively hit ya,
an re-an act jesus's death an cross u from the picture,
no
im writing with rage, with a lighting to gays,
fuck stage fright, he's so shit he frightans the stage,
no

Licorice seemed to drop a lil dopey and E just came weak, but Licorice did have way better concepts and quality in his verse, which gives him the upperhand even though he came played as well...so...

V/Licorice

[Blackflags]

yeah....Def, gonna have to go with Licorice on this one..........wasn't really a competition I thought....mostly a 1 sided battle.......Elaborate had a lot of multis and ish, but that shit doesn't hit hard man.....you HAVE to spit punchlines, or personals....they alone win you a battle.......Licorice had a few good punches...not illy and spectacular.......wordplay was decent......but all in all he won the better verse!!!


so my vote goes to Licorice

pz.

[darealMaRV]

lic

Entwined by ur speech, The way u refine a cause to preach
Ur drop’s heartfelt, like love letter’s ,way it reminds of a bitch
^^^^PREACH & BITCH DONT RYHME
Been bouncin around, like his position on his shin and chin is
For clean diss, E takes It back old skul, so he’s punches can b in this
^^WUT??
wit the lines he have, cant blame peeps who rather be in rehab
Fuk a spot light, …. Even popo having difficulties locating E-labs
^^^MEH
To bang this guy, dont get ur hopes up, thats w/ no slang in line
Ill cash in time, money don’t grow on trees, still E hangs on mine
^^NAH
Im quick to chase fortunes, for chicks to freak on too
E’s luck don’t stray…its gone, even a bitch wont stick on you
^^NO
Ur a scam El, Dinning in clams is when u dropping damn shells
And if ur main is a noob, think the rest should speak for themselves
^^^NO...YA VERSE WAS BORIN SON


El

Making my day, wat are u a Fake or a gay?,
plus rb’s 2 x better when we take u away,
^^^WERES R B TAKIN HIM?
im summin it up quick, the solutions ur shit,
& this pussies so bent he’s reduced to a prick,
^^^NO
Disputing ya spit, for tryin to evr doubt ur iller,
& We could make sandwiches with ur amount of filler,
^^LOL NO SON
Fuck personals, id only disclaim his career,
No wonder licor’s not stable, hes Named after beer,
^^MEH
All ur rhymes are messed up, but ill positively hit ya,
an re-an act jesus's death an cross u from the picture,
^^^NO
im writing with rage, with a lighting to gays,
fuck stage fright, he's so shit he frightans the stage,
^^PLAYED


V/LIC...

[kid sick']

Entwined by ur speech, The way u refine a cause to preach
Ur drop’s heartfelt, like love letter’s ,way it reminds of a bitch
no rhyme
Been bouncin around, like his position on his shin and chin is
For clean diss, E takes It back old skul, so he’s punches can b in this
no
wit the lines he have, cant blame peeps who rather be in rehab
Fuk a spot light, …. Even popo having difficulties locating E-labs
meh
To bang this guy, dont get ur hopes up, thats w/ no slang in line
Ill cash in time, money don’t grow on trees, still E hangs on mine
k
Im quick to chase fortunes, for chicks to freak on too
E’s luck don’t stray…its gone, even a bitch wont stick on you
no
Ur a scam El, Dinning in clams is when u dropping damn shells
And if ur main is a noob, think the rest should speak for themselves
ok




vs



Making my day, wat are u a Fake or a gay?,
plus rb’s 2 x better when we take u away,
no
im summin it up quick, the solutions ur shit,
& this pussies so bent he’s reduced to a prick,
no
Disputing ya spit, for tryin to evr doubt ur iller,
& We could make sandwiches with ur amount of filler,
no
Fuck personals, id only disclaim his career,
No wonder licor’s not stable, hes Named after beer,
no
All ur rhymes are messed up, but ill positively hit ya,
an re-an act jesus's death an cross u from the picture,
no
im writing with rage, with a lighting to gays,
fuck stage fright, he's so shit he frightans the stage,
no


v/Licorice

[B.Nesse]

Entwined by ur speech, The way u refine a cause to preach
Ur drop’s heartfelt, like love letter’s ,way it reminds of a bitch
no rhyme n wack either way
Been bouncin around, like his position on his shin and chin is
For clean diss, E takes It back old skul, so he’s punches can b in this
ummm wtf?
wit the lines he have, cant blame peeps who rather be in rehab
Fuk a spot light, …. Even popo having difficulties locating E-labs
nope
To bang this guy, dont get ur hopes up, thats w/ no slang in line
Ill cash in time, money don’t grow on trees, still E hangs on mine
nah
Im quick to chase fortunes, for chicks to freak on too
E’s luck don’t stray…its gone, even a bitch wont stick on you
k
Ur a scam El, Dinning in clams is when u dropping damn shells
And if ur main is a noob, think the rest should speak for themselves
no rhyme again

vs

Making my day, wat are u a Fake or a gay?,
plus rb’s 2 x better when we take u away,
no
im summin it up quick, the solutions ur shit,
& this pussies so bent he’s reduced to a prick,
no
Disputing ya spit, for tryin to evr doubt ur iller,
& We could make sandwiches with ur amount of filler,
no, overused concept
Fuck personals, id only disclaim his career,
No wonder licor’s not stable, hes Named after beer,
aight
All ur rhymes are messed up, but ill positively hit ya,
an re-an act jesus's death an cross u from the picture,
meh
im writing with rage, with a lighting to gays,
fuck stage fright, he's so shit he frightans the stage,
i like i dunno y but i do

v/elab
i dunno both were trash, elab had one decent line but it wasnt great so dont get gassed....lic didnt have any to be honest.

[Elaborate.]

my verse was wrote in 10 minutes so i know it wasnt great but i have better things to do...btw looks like most y'll cats dont get my punches not matter how weak they may be in this battle if you dont understand it dont call it shit ask me an ill explain it if needed...thanks for the votes guys...uppin..

[Tebo]

Entwined by ur speech, The way u refine a cause to preach
Ur drop’s heartfelt, like love letter’s ,way it reminds of a bitch
meh
Been bouncin around, like his position on his shin and chin is
For clean diss, E takes It back old skul, so he’s punches can b in this
lol
wit the lines he have, cant blame peeps who rather be in rehab
Fuk a spot light, …. Even popo having difficulties locating E-labs
lol
To bang this guy, dont get ur hopes up, thats w/ no slang in line
Ill cash in time, money don’t grow on trees, still E hangs on mine
ok
Im quick to chase fortunes, for chicks to freak on too
E’s luck don’t stray…its gone, even a bitch wont stick on you
heh
Ur a scam El, Dinning in clams is when u dropping damn shells
And if ur main is a noob, think the rest should speak for themselves
mehish

Vssss

Making my day, wat are u a Fake or a gay?,
plus rb’s 2 x better when we take u away,
no
im summin it up quick, the solutions ur shit,
& this pussies so bent he’s reduced to a prick,
naaaaah
Disputing ya spit, for tryin to evr doubt ur iller,
& We could make sandwiches with ur amount of filler,
ok
Fuck personals, id only disclaim his career,
No wonder licor’s not stable, hes Named after beer,
meh, he's named after CANDY....
All ur rhymes are messed up, but ill positively hit ya,
an re-an act jesus's death an cross u from the picture,
ok good
im writing with rage, with a lighting to gays,
fuck stage fright, he's so shit he frightans the stage,
decent

Elaborat I think you could be good if you tried more, had mmm 2 dec. lines. Liquore came more harder, better concepts.

V//Liquorice

[Nashvillain]

Entwined by ur speech, The way u refine a cause to preach
Ur drop’s heartfelt, like love letter’s ,way it reminds of a bitch
^dont rhyme
Been bouncin around, like his position on his shin and chin is
For clean diss, E takes It back old skul, so he’s punches can b in this
^na
wit the lines he have, cant blame peeps who rather be in rehab
Fuk a spot light, …. Even popo having difficulties locating E-labs
^weak
To bang this guy, dont get ur hopes up, thats w/ no slang in line
Ill cash in time, money don’t grow on trees, still E hangs on mine
^ok
Im quick to chase fortunes, for chicks to freak on too
E’s luck don’t stray…its gone, even a bitch wont stick on you
^decent
Ur a scam El, Dinning in clams is when u dropping damn shells
And if ur main is a noob, think the rest should speak for themselves
^ok

***VS***

Making my day, wat are u a Fake or a gay?,
plus rb’s 2 x better when we take u away,
^ok
im summin it up quick, the solutions ur shit,
& this pussies so bent he’s reduced to a prick,
^na
Disputing ya spit, for tryin to evr doubt ur iller,
& We could make sandwiches with ur amount of filler,
^played
Fuck personals, id only disclaim his career,
No wonder licor’s not stable, hes Named after beer,
^ok
All ur rhymes are messed up, but ill positively hit ya,
an re-an act jesus's death an cross u from the picture,
^no
im writing with rage, with a lighting to gays,
fuck stage fright, he's so shit he frightans the stage,
^nope

V//LICORICE

[Stephen Mayfield]

Fuck personals, id only disclaim his career,
No wonder licor’s not stable, hes Named after beer,

vs.


nothing



v/ elaborate........for rhyming all his lines....and having one MEH punch.