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  1. #1
    chemistry
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    east side

    Just chillin like we always do
    represent the east side
    wit bitches kickin it up the ride
    and you damn right we be puffin on the ly
    spitin amazin shit and we just don't try
    bumpin out the east coast flavor
    niggas while out cause they cant stand our behavor
    bitches while out cause they just wanna slave ya
    but we just want sex and they wanna date ya
    then when you shut them down they yell out they hate ya
    haters all around claim it's hard not to fall
    but i always manage to stay on top of it all
    now everyones sayin that they ball
    but damn they aint got nice things at all
    no cars nice clothes money or ice at all
    no shoes no watch no 9's or bitches at all
    you aint event in the right mind to claim that you ball
    you pussy ass bitch you don't represent the east side
    you walk your ass to places cause you got no ride
    the flavor will torment you and eat up your inside
    leave your ass layin there dead not alive
    i got hundreds in my wallet you only carryin a five
    east side flavor is just to nice
    we got niggas that'll kill you just for your ice
    spit there skills that'll eat you up like you was rice
    if you claim you east side be ready to pay the price
    cause will slice and dice and get your head captivated
    we know niggas in the marines that got activated
    if you can't understand this you better get it translated
    we aint like the police you aint gona get interigated
    just shot up with a phew by a phew
    you know on the east side thats how we do
    ya'll never find us alone cause one aint better than two
    face it our style is just wetta than you
    are rhymes are just betta than you
    you heard that shit so what you gonna do
    we aint never gona stop representin east side like we do
    belive that we hitin your bitch to
    and if were not well she want us to
    and your a faggot ass muther fucker so you probaly do to
    Last edited by chemistry; February 27th, 2003 at 08:21 PM

  2. #2
    MysticMastermind
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    i see you finished it, heh, it's nice, it has a nice flow, but the rhyme scheme is a lil basic, try to throw some multi's in there, change it up a lil, keep flowing
    EAST SIDE!

  3. #3
    Low Key
    Guest
    Nice flow.

    Try using a little more inner rhyme in your lines too.
    It's tight though.

    Peace.

  4. #4
    Alias-C
    Guest
    East Side! hell yeah...
    Damm dawg, this sounded like some party rap, industry shit... lol
    But thas your style, I ain't hatin...
    Yo, like my man said your flow was straight... but your rhymes could ah been better, a bit too basic yeah... you should work on that...
    Peace

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