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Thread: Don't Cry 4 Me

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    Thumbs up Don't Cry 4 Me

    All right Guyz now everyone knowz the song By 'PAC All Eyez On Me
    But I decided to get inventive and really get into songs and then
    reinvent them so this is my original word by word rhyming duplicate....
    But its Only 'PAC's first verse
    So Please give us some creative constructive cristicism
    Or praise It and tell me what you Liked?

    Don't Cry 4 Me

    I said to pop it blistered noobs won't go to be bust
    Yo fanny, slaya, gratin', diggerz line roundz like dust
    Pay them steady for the Junk But I wont sink I'll show 'em
    Fate to The steps of Spells Is where them Flowers growin',
    Well far to Chilled Sound, Trigger Dollars then it's eazy,
    I Bet Sea level HipHop for the day they stive to be Me,
    I spot A Taliban Of niggerz There from nine to five,
    Clippin', Love the Ruckus Bluff, then we Flash knives,
    Until I Fly, Brittle Knife as a Cross Blade-a,
    Just Leave them in a slice,
    Duck with me or get Tossed Hater the Abuse is in My sights,
    Just callin' in and Smashin' Thangs,
    A Knife, Trouble Oh, there Tauntin' Dashin' screams
    Uh, Switches Inlure me like a Beam,
    There shown to Crisp 'n' Clear for your Lies it strikes a Joke Theme,
    Spit Dreamz, My main claim waz to be favoured KrAzY,
    Shame harder than a Suffering Labour Trader,
    Stay funny Chris Bridges, Niggerz sing live,
    Some niggerz Fret to tell us Dumber Sucker Fry,
    Descend On me despite the Cursed Lipring,
    DayLight showed me a Poor lesson,
    Bust These Trunks, don't Shit me,
    We plot mo' Figures and Ghost Riderz,
    They Flee past, Stealin' From mine, Every dime they Cash!

    Don't Cry 4 Me

    Hope you lyked ;D
    Cassidy

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    Does anyone understand 'gangster ebonics' and care to translate this for me?
    Maybe I'm not "Hip Hop" enough but i don't even get what you mean in your first line.
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    //WordPerfect

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    Ditto to not understanding. If you're going to write it like this, then at least have a reason, otherwise why not write it so everyone can understand it? That makes the most sense for me. I'd like to know what you have to say, but I can't even make out the first line.

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