When God Was To Late

[So.Fist.Acated]

^uhhh thanks... i think... uppin 4 some real feed.

[Kstroyer]

Gods never late.. He is the beginning and the end.. so you were acting out of your flesh and not being led with the Holy Spirit.

[.Kr@ze.]

u had nice wordplay it was good all togther it was never really off
ur sturctre was pretty dam good i could read it perfect an tha lines were pefect length
tha topic u choose was ok alot of ppl write bout stuff liek this but its still a hard topic to write on an u kept on tha topic for tha whole piece

[CypherSoreEyez.]

Nice Piece You Had Some Good Multies In There, Overall I Was Feelin The Piece Even Though I Disagree With It, Cause God Is Never To Late It's The People Who Recieve God To Late, But Besides That I Was Feelin Your Use Of Imagery And Description, Keep Upp With The Writing, I Think You Can Do A Lot Better But Overall Nice Piece

[So.Fist.Acated]

Gods never late.. He is the beginning and the end.. so you were acting out of your flesh and not being led with the Holy Spirit.

ur retarted, thats not feed.

and the "God" part is a metaphor for all u retards out there... when people say they "Found God" that means they've changed their bad ways... its saying that she was 2 late 4 that change... DVS is the only one who really understood this piece so far...

upp

[mc pyro.]

damn this is a real nice peice son great topic and the flowz went along wit it perfectly imagery was beyond greatness just every word painted a picture ending was good wrapped it up and to the point never got side tracked multis i thought i was decent at multies but afters readin this i relized i got a lot of work to do great wit those nice peice 9/10 stay up

[So.Fist.Acated]

aight thanks 4 da feed... lets get some more

[Bo6vious]

good shit,
flow- the flow was really nice, i think you had some really enjoyable multis and the rhyme scheme was complex and interesting
concept- the whole thing was simple, i think you cudve came up with something more fulfilling to write about, decent tho, just not something everyone can relate to
imagery- i could picture it, not percisely but yeah
phisical connection- i think you didnt have alot of this, i really couldnt picture the scenery at all
mental connection- ahhh the best for last, yes your mental connection was intriguing really. you connected with the lady, and beth.

well done

[So.Fist.Acated]

thanks 4 da feed upp

[So.Fist.Acated]

bah.. kay last up people... lets get some good feed 2 finish this shit off