Topic: Shark Attack
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elitefreestyler
Poetic Justice
Topic: Shark Attack
15 - 20 lines
Due an hour after check in...
how long do you have to check in?
this is my check
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I Don't Follow Rules I Let The Rules Follow Me
I'm ahead of my class fucker
And I only serve a bitch once so they treat my dick like the Last Supper
I Don't Rap Fast You Just Listen Slow.
Shark Attack
I was swimming in the ocean with one of my friends.
Then somehow i accidentally cut my hands.
There was blood pouring out so i washed it in the water.
Then a fish swam by and my friend caught her.
But then i see a fin and it's coming to me.
My friend panicked when he saw it and began to leave.
Now i'm not a fast swimmer so I could only paddle lightly.
I felt immense pain when the shark came to bite me.
I punched it in the nose like they said on tv.
I wish i was invisible so it couldn't see me.
Now the shark was angry and it's mouth opened wide.
And i felt a sharp pain go into my thigh.
Then my friend came back with 3 more niggas.
they all had guns and pulled the trigger.
The shark was shot dead.
It was hit 4 times in the head.
I fried that bitch up and some bum was fed.
explanationi gave it to a bum and he ate it)
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I Don't Follow Rules I Let The Rules Follow Me
I'm ahead of my class fucker
And I only serve a bitch once so they treat my dick like the Last Supper
I Don't Rap Fast You Just Listen Slow.
Shark Attack...
It’s an average summer day, sun beating down on the waves
And I’m chillin with all my people, jus soakin up the rays
When my brain starts throbbing, slowly fillin up with pain
Try to go back but it feels like I’m swimming against a chain
The current is too strong and now my fams dissapeared
In the distance I can see a shadow, as the ache starts to sear
I need to clear my head, but I’m drenched in the fear
As my eye glazes over, everything but the shadow disappears..
I’m confused, gliding forward, deciding what tactics I’ll employ
It must the adrenaline, because it’s something that I’m starting to enjoy…
I’m going insane I know it, this shadow is shaking, vibrating
I can feel it all the way up my spine, it looks like a ghost playing
It’s long and slim and moves quickly in the most sinister way
Suddenly it attacks me, jabs wickedly and a blood mist sprays
I can feel the loss in my stomach, the pain just escalates
Bones breaking, organs displacing, so continues the tirade
I can feel my mouth is full of flesh, warm and juicy
Raw like sushi, memory starts coming back, but loosely
I just learnt to swim, my first kill, I’m a young’n who’s to blame
My teeth is real sharp baby, I was jus settling my hunger pain…
Uppin for votes............................................. .....................
Leave a link and I'll return the favour.
huh
here i go again begging for votes
uppin for the first time..................
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I Don't Follow Rules I Let The Rules Follow Me
I'm ahead of my class fucker
And I only serve a bitch once so they treat my dick like the Last Supper
I Don't Rap Fast You Just Listen Slow.
Poetic//////better.../////but i'll merk both you in a topical no hate//./....
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Drunken Thoughts
One Sided...
elite you were very basic here....preschool
Poetic clearly took this
good job to both...1
Edward S. Casey a.k.a (E)=m(C)2
Originally Posted by Dic-tion-ar-y
what the fuck?
thats no explanation
*** gave a good explanation but you just dickridin
no dickride votes
no crew votes
no hate votes
come on people vote right
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I Don't Follow Rules I Let The Rules Follow Me
I'm ahead of my class fucker
And I only serve a bitch once so they treat my dick like the Last Supper
I Don't Rap Fast You Just Listen Slow.
uppin for the second time
i want some good and explained votes people please
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I Don't Follow Rules I Let The Rules Follow Me
I'm ahead of my class fucker
And I only serve a bitch once so they treat my dick like the Last Supper
I Don't Rap Fast You Just Listen Slow.
poetic took dis 1 betta structure betta flow all around betta verse no hate n i d/r no1
v//poetic
BUMP
elite pull ya skirt up...
And Dictionary, I'm ya lil tourney thing so you can stop runnin ya mouth
V//Poetic
this was a onsided battle poetic made his topical a story which is why it grabbed my attentin elite yours was basic elevate a little bit on your imagery and vocab
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shut the fuck up nigga you garbage
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I Don't Follow Rules I Let The Rules Follow Me
I'm ahead of my class fucker
And I only serve a bitch once so they treat my dick like the Last Supper
I Don't Rap Fast You Just Listen Slow.
mines was a story too nigga
you probably didnt even read it
ya niggas either hatin or dick ridin
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I'm ahead of my class fucker
And I only serve a bitch once so they treat my dick like the Last Supper
I Don't Rap Fast You Just Listen Slow.
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