Salvation

[J|a|y]

Bring famine to the pestilence and war to the death//
they'll be lucky to find a peace of you to put in the floor when u rest//

Yes, and when it's found they'll be shippin' it to Greece//
My flesh crowned, displayed like Mic Angelo's master"piece"//

As I write this rhyme I'm ventin' anger needed to release//
The disease that's called heartbreak the worst of all defeats//

You feel me? An I spit fire, when I'm feelin' heat//
My lines become arrays, Now I'm matchin' the sun's degrees//

My expertise is unlimited, skills neva stop to seize//
Sucessful as an MC, I'm aimin' higha fo' MD//

Not Wendy's, gangsters need education//
To take the art of Hip Hop to a whole new elevation//

Make it next to holy, add a verse to Revelations//
Havin' scholars in the future usin' it fo' foundation,//

Of literature, an application//
Of true rhythm, lit devices, and syncopation//

Image Hip Hop gettin' make me sick with asphyxiation//
So join in my crusades cus we are music's salvation//

[Gurbil]

I Like the opening few bars it isnt really my type of verse it seemed braggadocio and like it belonged more infront lines than open mic.
that said it wasnt bad i felt it for the mose part.
reply to mine if u get a chance:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...18#post3846018

peace g g g g gurbil u-nit