--- Alphabetical Slaughter ---

[Phenom_354]

Ok, ok, now what you are going to experience may blow, your, mind....ah haaaa

Lets go..

Advancing around areas astounding all atmospheres /
Arbitrator attacking apperatous above any astro-fears /
Annihalating against abrupt associations /
Before bitches bruttaly bomb bi-coastal-nations /
Beheading bi-laterally breaking backs bio-chemicaly /
Cancer can cause catostrophic cause-alities /
Center circuit computer census college cowards casualties /
Deportin dickheads dialect dominating dumb demonstrations /
Disecting duel duelists dueling deformatations /
Downplay defections dislikes diplomaticly /
Enemies exsert emotions exsubertly even erraticly /
Erupt ears encolse enclaves eventually /
Fire five figmints forclose fagz fake feelings /
Fornicate female friends fondelin four freedmans /
Fuck freedom free fourty fiends /
Gravitate galixies gradually graduate g.e.d's /
Genuisly generate god give gifts /
Hecktickly heckle hatas hatin have half his hits /
Honned harmonickly house homming heaters /
Holdin hoes hostage heavy heat-seekers /
Ignore ignorance instead immatate intellegence /
Investigate improper intel-relevance /
Jay-Z'n jealous jiggas jivin jaw jackas /
Karate kickin knowledge killin killas katanas /
Leapin longevity lost lowely leathal logic /
Leavin lyrical legacy longer legal lathargic /
Metal mouth material mechanics /
Missunderstood mid-evil mental malpractice /
Muscle misses mystically mouthin my mistress /
Noticle nusense never negotiating nathen /
Nothin new nuclear nano-weapons not nutreal /
Oppisition opression oral obseestions only one's obsticles /
Object over over-bearing optomatrist on oscar's ohhh /
Perfect position pre-meditated precision /
Possibly pre-punctual problematic paperatzies /
Quality quantem-phsyics quiting queer qualities /
Re-mediate rash responses report riffin ready rappers /
Rotate reprocussions re-enact robbings run reflect /
Study sentences schoolin surreal sucess /
Self surrounded solice shooting stars suicidal subjects /
Telepathic tourential terrible tremendic themes /
Tourture two turantualas tabernacle ten teams /
Urgently utter undeniable uses /
Under unexceptable unprepaired u use-less /
Violently verbilize vast vixens /
Verses vice virgins very vicieous /
World wide wonder wisk whispers /
Which wimper while weather whithers /
X-Zibit X-Ecutioners X-Box'in X-Clans /
Ying Yang Young yankers youthless yes-mans /
Zenith Zig Zag Zillas Z-Ro zip zero....

[MADDUS]

fuck fam...that was fire...i seen the alphabet thing done...
but not like this...usually the first word...that shit musta
took some time...cos of its creativeniss, originality and
obvious intent...cant really tell you to improve on anything...
just give props...fucken str8 fam...nuff said...peace

[Percept]

good try.... but the words were too simplistic... the vocab needs to be huge in this type of drop, good try tho, and get rid of the "/", then it would be nice

[Phenom_354]

good lookin out maddus....

percept - go play elsewhere

[Strange_Dayz]

DAMN I liked the whole thing mane..but the b part seemed a lil forced..otherwise this would be perfect 9.8/10

[KªL¡]

wasnt bad, but i've seen trhis concept before so therefor its not like it was very creative, ok wordplay, but like was said before, work on using more and definitive words that will grasp the read, lots of wordplay and shit is good, but back it up with something stronger following it ya know homie, but other than that good shit just work on consistencyu there was some paerts where i was stopped form inconsistency of line/ rhyme scheme, keep droppn homie,pz.

[Crucial.]

Papoose is WAY doper then you are.

Boo @ bein unoriginal.

[Percept]

percept - go play elsewhere

stfu. if you dont appreciate me feedback, dont post your rip-off verse

[b_rEEz]

played out, been done, been done better....try to use an original concept, thats all i can say, the vocabs there..and the rhymin is alrite..

[-IsIs-]

yo photo dont be a dick, lets see you try that shit. you gotta realize doin the alphabet is fuckin hard tryin to get the lines to connect to make it make sense.

Phenom - it was a good piece man. the flow was tight and the vocab grab was obviously pretty dope. I understand that makin the lines connect and have it make sense and not be fragments if imposssible but you kept it in line for as good as it ever could be. I liked the rhymescheme and the complexity in the words you chose to rhyme with. overall the piece was pretty dope. 8/10 for effort.

[Phenom_354]

yo photo dont be a dick, lets see you try that shit. you gotta realize doin the alphabet is fuckin hard tryin to get the lines to connect to make it make sense.

Phenom - it was a good piece man. the flow was tight and the vocab grab was obviously pretty dope. I understand that makin the lines connect and have it make sense and not be fragments if imposssible but you kept it in line for as good as it ever could be. I liked the rhymescheme and the complexity in the words you chose to rhyme with. overall the piece was pretty dope. 8/10 for effort.

lol... ^ thats what i said, let them try and get like 2 letters in an run out of shit to say...

Also... they say its played, possibly cuz there not able to do it? hmmm..
Yea, pappose did his good, but listen to it to refresh your memory, you didnt rhyme every letter every time... and still make as much sense as its gonna make..

You can hate on it all yall want... that just proves it worth it to say sumthin

[Phenom_354]

lol... ^ thats what i said, let them try and get like 2 letters in an run out of shit to say...

Also... they say its played, possibly cuz there not able to do it? hmmm..
Yea, pappose did his good, but listen to it to refresh your memory, you didnt rhyme every letter every time... and still make as much sense as its gonna make..

You can hate on it all yall want... that just proves it worth it to say sumthin

[tactical_]

phenom listen.................
i dont like

[Lauren.]

didn't u drop dis on f-c a while back? no hatin jus askin

[Bounce]

When we used to this this way back before there was a papoose verse, then yeah it was dope. Now it's just regergitated lines. It had it's time and that was long ago, hell you might be able to pull up my verse like this from like 3 years ago. Today, it's old just like aa bb rhyme schemes...