10 lines.
verse due 20 minutes after check in.
house rules.
10 lines.
verse due 20 minutes after check in.
house rules.
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yo u just said i set it up... WTF?
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what ever
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Ayo, u a nobody, yea im da shit
i bitch slap ya and show you who's really it
i been watchin ya, takin notes, like imma new york times
u got no style,u scared cuz u kno i drop dimes
u think u is a writa'?
well guese what, my shit mo' tighta'
i beat ya ass like i's n street fighta'
i put the pen to da pad,put ya ass unda' da ground, yea bitch its sad
who much u suck, put jenna jamison 2 shame
be like iraq, blow ya ass up wit a plane
u gonna drop
o wait u still didnt check
fuckin pussy ass
still tryin to think of shit 2 say?
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Dogg step up, unlike your sig this aint no cat fight.
Slice you up acouple times leave you lookin like pin stripes.
Im the boss of this tone you know you cant lead me.
You still couldnt push shot, even if you had diabeaties.
Im dope, and thats that, but lemme take you for a ride.
Choke this bitch so bad he couldnt even swollow his own pride.
I not new to this game, but headed to the top from under.
I cant see this Fake MC like im viewin through the eyes of Stevie Wonder.
Cause im too dope for you, and you know your wack son.
Three silver teeth in your mouth is the only time you spittin platnum.
Done.
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uppin...
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wow again lmfao tp your verse is way 2 short homie u need to makeyour lines a little shorter nice structure but it aint shit with no punches or personals journalist u in cuz u spit a good verse
thanx..uppin..
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WERD HOMIEOriginally Posted by yo boy D
uppin...i killed this dude come on...
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this batle was really simple
tip-A- had a simple flow, didn't really mention anything. no multies, weak really. 2/10
J- had a simple flow as well, but extend his words more.better punches. str8 structure..... 5.6/10
VoTE/ jornal!st
stay up
Journal!st breakdown..
Dogg step up, unlike your sig this aint no cat fight.
Slice you up acouple times leave you lookin like pin stripes.
okay..average...5/10
Im the boss of this tone you know you cant lead me.
You still couldnt push shot, even if you had diabeaties.
Nice.....8.5/10
Im dope, and thats that, but lemme take you for a ride.
Choke this bitch so bad he couldnt even swollow his own pride.
another nice punch...9/10
I not new to this game, but headed to the top from under.
I cant see this Fake MC like im viewin through the eyes of Stevie Wonder.
played and average..3.5/10
Cause im too dope for you, and you know your wack son.
Three silver teeth in your mouth is the only time you spittin platnum.
str8...aiight punch,but juss a lil bove average..5.5/10
Tip-A breakdown..
Ayo, u a nobody, yea im da shit
i bitch slap ya and show you who's really it
nope...2/10
i been watchin ya, takin notes, like imma new york times
u got no style,u scared cuz u kno i drop dimes
average...5/10
u think u is a writa'?
well guese what, my shit mo' tighta'
i beat ya ass like i's n street fighta'
Good multi's but basic as fuck...4/10
i put the pen to da pad,put ya ass unda' da ground, yea bitch its sad
Hell NO!!!..1/10
who much u suck, put jenna jamison 2 shame
be like iraq, blow ya ass up wit a plane
okay begining but the ending is awfull.....3/10
overall/=Journalist won this hands down,By havin better punches an structure..Tip-A..You need ta work on being creative with wording an structure...cuz you juss got merk'd..no hate,juss fact!
V/=journal!st
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