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Thread: Ambitions

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    Madik
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    Ambitions

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...93#post3466793

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3466823

    Someone hand me the mic and watch me recite
    despite what you like or dislike, admit disciple's is tight

    Verse 1
    madik, still and ill, skilled with drills, so infectious
    like a random tantrum with a handgun, so step to this
    and get popped, dropped, cause we cocked up and loaded
    with a swif of the mic and you'll be to topped off to know this
    cause we distributing tracks, see we get up and do it
    while you pullin yo pads at home, leakin with fluid
    see i'll stampede and stamp these rhymes til you remember me
    and jog you brain around the block to jog yo fuckin' memory
    cause once the night hits and the knife slips, i'm like this
    empty nine clips in ya rhyme spits til ya life drips
    and there's no exit, i'm wreckless, from cali to texas
    disciples with rifles to make yo eyes close, so come and test us
    see we roll so dee, mothafuckers need a shovel to find us
    how can we fall, we got the city of angels behind us

    hook x4
    cause these are the ambitions of a rider
    missions, pullin clips into bitches who defy us

    Verse 2
    Hold up! Someone stop the beat! Time for spitshine
    you couldnt hit twice if you punchlines could rewind
    with flows that could shred ya ears up like mic tyson
    i sit here wonderin' why you carry a mic lisence
    you write nonsense, while i come strickly with sick flows
    thick blow that hit those who spits shows but ain't shit tho
    so get close, gather around, come near to witness
    what is this? a free flow, emcee in business
    see i'll beat you with no reason, hits til there's no breathin
    no treason, im a moster waiting to greet you in snow season
    when it's below freesin to make ya brain retract in
    and only third of mc are ill and i'm half the fraction

    hook x4

  2. #2
    Madik
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    can i get some feedback

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    2 Time ABL Champ K-JaBz's Avatar
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    I was never big on West coast rap, but that rhyme is tight. Good flow. Well structured. Keep it up homie.

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    ~K-JaBz~

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    thats cool

  5. #5
    Madik
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    thanks for the feed....uppin'.

  6. #6
    Madik
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    damn, no feedback? can i get more than one line

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    sick rhymes. gud structure 2. wht else can i say sick lyrics. lol. so keep it comin lookin forward 2 ur nxt 1.

  8. #8
    Madik
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    Quote Originally Posted by kmazhvtk
    sick rhymes. gud structure 2. wht else can i say sick lyrics. lol. so keep it comin lookin forward 2 ur nxt 1.
    thanks bro...i'll drop another one soon.

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    shit was good. nice flow too

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  10. #10
    Madik
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    thanks for the good feedback ya'll. I'll drop a few more things on here and get in some battles.

  11. #11
    Madik
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    uppin' this piece ya'll.

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    This drop is good...i was feelin the rhymes

    they were tight and the flow was smooth

    strucutre was even through out.....

    good overall..keep it up and can you

    check out ym drop called eternal rest..thanks

    and leave feed....peace..........

  13. #13
    Madik
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    thanks bro for the feedback and i left some feed for your drop.

  14. #14
    Young Trill
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    dat shit was tight homie like K-JaBz i aint a big fan of dat west coast shit eitha but yo rhymes were ill hit ma OM up... i aint gotta link but its called Your Turn... hit me up Madik and mayb we can hit up a collab

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    Madik
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    aight, i'm always up for a collab homie...thanks for the feedback too.

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