the process of anger

[master theisis]

okay i had to write some quick shit for my creative writing class today and this is what i came up with





when topigraphical elements take shape and form
the normality of brutality morphs into the norm
billions of bundles in flocks rush to overconform
to gerneralities, while the wise judge without scorn

-anger is progressive when true-
-dangerous if directed in hate-
-ressurects friendships anew-
-but adds burden like weights-
-unnecessarily proved with action-
-yet necessary to comprehend-
-closes doors with satisfaction-
-all misconcepted in satan's den-

-the ego uneasily copes-
-but in stride, humility resides-
-matterless, abuse is mistaken for hope-
-the good side is what the sword hides-
-genetics establish dominance-
-morality stands as a choice-
-hate and pride control your providece-
-with your rage, you quiet your voice-

this is where reality distorts, illusions occur
under scientific providence we rest assured
into anger, the entire population concurrs
the postive feedback ratings are outnumbered

[master theisis]

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[Black Hornet]

good flow homie, but about half way through your piece i think you kinda go a little sloppy with the impact of your rhymes. all in all it was a deep piece, intelligent, and lack of consistant heavy rhymes were made up for with in depth research and knowledge.
good work

i'd give it a 7.25/10, you can do better homie.

[master theisis]

thans for the input homie

uppin for some feed.......

[Johnny 6-feet]

Closed, only 1 drop per 24 hours and the 1 line feedback in your links isn't decent feedback. Read the rules before you post again.