Crew Battle: lyrical definition vs. Case Closed
3x vs. ToTwoToo
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You guys agree on line limits. and check in is due tonight midnight(EST)
Due date for verse is one hour after check in.
Goodluck to both.
3x
ToTwoToo
Crew Battle: lyrical definition vs. Case Closed
3x vs. ToTwoToo
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You guys agree on line limits. and check in is due tonight midnight(EST)
Due date for verse is one hour after check in.
Goodluck to both.
12 lines? this is not my check.
ya 12 is cool due today so there is no rush check within 30
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here is my check good luck man
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eh yo. after you check you gotta drop an hour after that. didnt you read the rules? dang....oh well.. ill let it slide for you. but make sure you drop by midnight(EST).
btw this aint my check in.
ch check!
stop the vet act, you makin things different as they seem
like his sig says 12 ko's, after i win its thirteen
my flow'll boil ya, if you win it means i spoiled ya
cuz like i said im not Buyin ya fake act, cuz you a wanna be Sold-ja
now let me boost ya spirit, n tell what ur crew has
the best lyrical definition, for the term called wack
nobody likes you, your Alone, his rhymes are colder than Iceland
cuz his rap, nobody Care for It, cuz everyone nose hes a snowman
for ya show, nobody Pays attention, everyone ignore em
ur raps dont look good in Threads, for everyones sake you should leave For-em
u wasnt ready for this, like you just woke up in the morning
beatin him was a good workout, cuz now i feel im Soar-ing
he's the leader of a crew now how can that be
he only beats wack kids like eazy-e
kid thinks he can rap(haha)he must be on crack
true skill is a blessing and you straight up lack
your crew un beaten now that has to end
my words to complicated he cant comprehend
you get shred to pieces end up lookin like ya sig
hes a dumbass he thought his crew was gonna go big
his played bars is goin nowhere just like his fam
you wont make the grade you failin the exam
thought you would win this and i wasnt a match
bitch i leave this battle untouched or scrathed
as exam i meant battle just so all of you know
sry it took so long g/l
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stop the vet act, you makin things different as they seem
like his sig says 12 ko's, after i win its thirteen
Actually, he's ko'd 12 people so this doesn't make sense
my flow'll boil ya, if you win it means i spoiled ya
cuz like i said im not Buyin ya fake act, cuz you a wanna be Sold-ja
Kinda cool, but not a punch
now let me boost ya spirit, n tell what ur crew has
the best lyrical definition, for the term called wack
Needed wit to it, but this is a diss at least
nobody likes you, your Alone, his rhymes are colder than Iceland
cuz his rap, nobody Care for It, cuz everyone nose hes a snowman
Very creative, but pretty corny....not much of a punch.. he's a snowman, big whup lol
for ya show, nobody Pays attention, everyone ignore em
ur raps dont look good in Threads, for everyones sake you should leave For-em
Basic diss.. pretty weak
u wasnt ready for this, like you just woke up in the morning
beatin him was a good workout, cuz now i feel im Soar-ing
Stop the soar-ing thing as it's not needed with the hyphen. Weak diss
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he's the leader of a crew now how can that be
he only beats wack kids like eazy-e
A personal that sorta hit but not that hard
kid thinks he can rap(haha)he must be on crack
true skill is a blessing and you straight up lack
Also very basic, needed wit to it
your crew un beaten now that has to end
my words to complicated he cant comprehend
Same as above, too basic
you get shred to pieces end up lookin like ya sig
hes a dumbass he thought his crew was gonna go big
Blah, same as above again, lol
his played bars is goin nowhere just like his fam
you wont make the grade you failin the exam
A weak statement here pretty much
thought you would win this and i wasnt a match
bitch i leave this battle untouched or scrathed
proofread your stuff so you don't make spelling errors.. weak statement
Pretty weak battle here, especially for a crew battle, y'all should come harder. Here's the way I see it. 3x was more consistent, but he didn't have a single good punch. Everything of his was just pretty weak and plain, nothing I haven't seen before. ToTwoToo had a lot of shit that didn't land, but he had a few bars which did which landed much better than 3x's. ToTwo, you got the creativity, now just work on the meanness and hitting harder. Close one, but..
Vote - ToTwoToo
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3x- your shit was 2 weak and basic. u tryed to go for punches but they didn't connect and was wack. try 2 make harder punches that will effect ur opponent. also be more creative cuz u had no creativity and need some better vocabs so it can make ur verse looks stronger. Two had this one cuz i liked some of his punches but some was weak dough so u try 2 come with harder punches as well. 1
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to-your verse was okay there were some punches there it was better than 3x though your punches hit and nice structure
3x-your verse was bad there were no good punches and you need better personals
V/to for better overall verse
TNL
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