My style

[mcl]

A FEW LINES ABOUT ME
If I had one wish it would be that I could make it
Just into one issue of source to explain my hit
To all u hip hop heads how my life crap
Fully inspired me to write this rap
Cause plenty of shit happened in just 2 years
I lost my parents and saw to many tears
Crawling down my sisters face
This ain’t it all this is just a taste
So don’t tell me how it feels
U didn’t have to cook all your meals
Night n day, day n night
What ever happened I never lost the hope that I might
One day triumph over death
Walk through the streets without holding my breath
It might not be the Bronx but its getting that way
One of my close friends gets smacked everyday
What for I hear u say
Fuck all it just works that way

[sILLable]

i did have to cook my own meal night n day...my moms isnt dead..but she was a crack head when i was a kid....ive been cookin my own food since i was 5 and 6....but just to get that out of the way..all this piece had was emotion...there wasnt anything there complex...you should elevate your rhyme scheme adn wordplay...hit up the piece titled God has a Gun..id appreciate it