The Booth

[Duece D]

Like crazy glue, my lyrics stick 2 you, cuz this is wat i do/
get in da booth and speak the truth, let no rock go unmoved/
ill with the teck, i claim my set, and show respect to get respect/
yes im a threat, i get at your neck, spit quick and simple with no regret/
sharp like incersions, devour the vermon, and in my Lac im steady swervin/
for fame im yearnin, still always learnin, spit so ill you'd think its a sermon/
quick with ryhmes, im bound to shine, sit back and recline, cuz its my time/
lime light is mine, i stay on the grind, drop on a dime, my flos blow your mind/
no stoppin this, apocolaypse, when droppin this, im coppin hits/
some call it quits, cuz words dont fit, but i can tell this here is the shit/

im srry this was kinda short...but i only had a lil time 2 do this so this is it


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...82#post2949682
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post2949657

[sILLable]

rhyme scheme was basic..your iamger and wordplay were also basic...i didnt care for this particular topic...you need to utilize some more complexity in your rhymes..keep elevatin and droppin.~1~

[Duece D]

ok thx 4 da feed....uppin

[Legacy01]

yea, was okay... trie too many multis i thought.... n didnt really get much to a point... was easy to read so i give ya props 4 dat, keep elevatiiiiin

[TeLLaKoNeSiS]

i felt the multies weren't fantastic but where ok they just needed to be placed a lil better, your flow was basic and so was the vocab, You Need to try and be more specific with words i know it ain't actually about anything but yourself so maybe you should try actually spitting on a topic try and elevate yourself higher?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=221511

Return the favour please

PaRa