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unique verse first of all. first reading i got the impression that it was cheerful, then your mood changed to depressing, than sort of back to cheerful. lol. it was good though because that goes to show how life is, always changing, moods never the same. the complexity of this verse wasn't high but i thiink that it doesn't need to be on topics like these so its ok. nice flow in here, i saw some multies in the middle. this verse was good man, you got potential, keep it up.
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agreed.. you do have some potential. Was interesting piece to say the least, and I kinda got the same feeling as Glor, with the happiness / sadness ordeal, but all in all it was a decent drop. One thing that could've improved was a different rhyme scheme to it, the flow was just oo..kk.. but it could've been niceR with a dope scheme. Keep up..
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