amazing peom so deep and it was such an enjoyable read..
Some say that sleep is the cousin of death
Laying on this mattress, might this be my last breath?
Contemplating on my life upon my life, so close to my dreams
If I die tonight I hope I have enough strength in a last attempt to hem life’s seems
I’m so sorry you had to see me, lying motionless like this
But I promise to be waiting for you at the gate of Heavens entrance
those were my fav lines^
awww hunny this is one of the nicest and most emotion poems i'v ever read of yours. I Love it! I'm sooo glad that patty cakes is there by your side and that true love really does exist...maybe someday i'll find it myself, but hun along w/ patrick you have me. and forever i promise i'll be here for you no matter what! I Love you! You'll always be my grl!
much love~*
This was a tite drop, i really enjoyed this it was deep, ur a good poet... stay up
imma go peep some your other drops...
~1
PINKY <AKA> EKONOMIX
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