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    Body Language

    dipped in the meticulously chosen hue of love
    i paint the rising sun of your eyes
    and i find a quaintness in the paintstress
    flames of passion wrap your frame
    that dance contently in my memory
    ..
    with eyes wide shut i take escape in the scape
    of your faint grin and soft skin
    i get lost in thought, beauty found in translation
    for they say a picture tells a thousand words
    and your sculpted curves leave me speechless
    ..
    Deep within the pools of your soul
    lays wisdom and i feel as if
    i wade too long within the fantasy of my fancies
    i'll surely drown if those waves ripple
    ..
    swirls of paint drapes your hips
    crisp like a bite from a ripe apple
    wrapped in your smile is the silent desire
    for us to conspire the passion of the Sistine Chapel
    ..
    This illustration is painted with an ocean of emotion
    that i drink in gulps and speaks volumes
    the depth of your features keeps me
    shrouded in the whispy puffs of cloud 9
    ..
    Divine, i open my eyes to greet you
    welcomed on earth down from my dreams
    i enjoyed tonight's conversation my mute beauty
    I viewed your mind and spoke within the confines
    of what must be your first language, body art
    spoken with the tongue of a perfect portrait
    -Fiasco
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    I really really liked this piece man, the images you presented were vivid and the comparison of body language as well as the girl's beauty and a painting was incredible, a really good take man and a piece i feel like was very well written, one of the better pieces of the month, so im nominating it nice job, and on a side note you're elevating like a mother lol good to see, i hope you remain active and stay up, 1luv.
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    Thanks god...a lil late but UPPPP
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