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  1. #1

    Miles Away

    Im miles away from sanity/
    My situation has been passed on through generation now its at me/
    Im either hallucinatin or im crazy/
    the television shows of my era have corrupted me/
    my eyes tell the story of my life and still they misjudge me/
    I repent for my mistakes and the still chastise me/
    Ive been givin alot but I wont let my oppurtunities define me/
    Im miles away from everything that makes normal people rejoice/
    thank god im writing or you could hear the pain in my voice/
    im miles away from love and affection/
    never speak my mind wit a girl cuz im scared of rejection/
    death come easy my soul need protection/
    stay good cuz i dont wanna be one of satans weapons/
    confused and lost in a world where im just a statistic/
    if i die to give life i'll gladly give heaven a visit/
    look down on hell and smile cuz i know i wont miss it/
    lyfe & death aint nuthin but a transition/
    im miles away from sanity i know some of my mind missing/
    you remember the chronicles of Lyfe & Death cuz somewhere there all written/
    Lyfe & Death

  2. #2
    something new dont sleep on the kid
    Lyfe & Death

  3. #3
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    Join Date
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    Really wasnt feelin this peace, Don't worry tho. There's still room to grow. So just keep droppin.

  4. #4
    dats cool appreciate it. keep it comin
    Lyfe & Death

  5. #5
    G-Money
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    i like the message being said in this ...but a few things i didnt like that u should work on for the next time u drop... i noticed u used me as a rhymin word alot change that up next time show us u can really spit...n ur rhyme scheme was simple... try evening out ur bars too makes it look better ... im not sayin this was a bad piece jus needs work ... keep droppin n u will evelate fast ...

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