This shit was bangin hott shit man you got some ill shit in here man nice shit
This shit was bangin hott shit man you got some ill shit in here man nice shit
Molotov.
This Piece Was Dope Man, One thing wrong, well not wrong just made it hard to follow that was the rhyme structure but that ain't shit really flowed nicely.
We should write a collab out sometime
do you do audio?
Pm Me if you're interested Oh and By the way thanks for the feedback on my Track
PaRa
I Don't Need A Sig?
Hmm..
very nice drop...Like the complexity...and i like the meta's you use in some lines
Pretty good.....Almost Legendary with a couple more tweeks...but you still get a good rating
8/10
LethalXpressionZ
Xpressing Lethalness
Thanks for the feed, Still uppin.
This joint is serious the story is hot everything was tight..... Word
Check me out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=181816
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Dead in the middle of Little Italy little did we know
that we riddled some middleman who didn't do diddily
~Big Pun~
I rub your face off the Earth and curse your family children
like Amityville drill the nerves in your cavity fillin
Insanity's building up pavillion in my civilian
The cannon be the anarchy that humanity's dealing
A villain without remorse, who's willing to out your boss
Forever and take all the cheddar like child support
~Big Pun~
yeah yeah, i felt that through and through, the only change id make is maybe the format. but there was some throw'd imagery, yo. nice.
on your knees.
Lets get some more feed.
That was TIGHT... I like the topic... Good choice of words... Can't wait to see ur next drop
REAL RECOGNIZE REAL AND REAL YOU AINT NEVER BEEN
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I'll have another one done by Sat.
No nominations? *Cries*
Lets get some more crit please.
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