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    Conspiracy...

    Conspiracy…

    The gayness of this topic almost made me drop it…
    Then I figured maybe, that’s exactly what they wanted.
    For me to skip the gauntlet and take the easy route…
    Never have my hearing haunted, never see shadows of doubt.
    Be a good Boy Scout and promise to pledge daily…
    An allegiance so devout, no wonder foreigners hate me.
    But maybe it’s all shadow, cloak and dagger attire…
    Two faced, hidden moles, with information for hire.
    And weapons for buyers…anyone need a nuke?
    I think Iran and North Korea are looking to sell a few.
    Then there’s…
    Aliens all around us, mimicking our appearance…
    Communicating through static that we think’s interference.
    Planning their invasion, while probing for answers…
    Cept I hear they probe so deep, it’s like they’re looking for cancer.
    And remember…
    The disappearance of Hoffa, everyone prayed for him…
    Until it was rumored, Jimmy’s under Giant’s Stadium.
    See, they couldn’t find him in the city, so twigs shook…
    When they searched the nearest forest and spotted Bigfoot.
    Who was searching himself, now excuse this moment of filler…
    But even he wanted to find the real Simpson/Goldman killers.
    But no luck at all, they’ll never take the fall…
    It’s a justice got fucked party and the Ramsey’s are hosting it all!
    Special guest, Chandra’s killer, he’ll Levy us laughing soon…
    By reminding everyone of us, we’ve never really been to the moon.
    We’re buffoons constantly lied to, will be till heaven…
    But wait…shit! Is religion even true...or bullshit like 9/11?


    Relax a bit, aight...these aren't my thoughts!

    I've responded to half a dozen diss verses in the last two days...
    If ya want specifics, I'll get em.

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    good drop man.liked very much how u started,not getting into the topic immediatly.it looked to me this is more like a keystyle,u didn't sit down and think on something specific.you more like went with the flow.by the way,in the line " think Iran and North Korea are looking to sell a few." waren't u meaning to say buy a few?i think you were but writen sell by mistake.anyway back to yar drop.it's not that much to say,they waren't any deep thoughts in it,no wicked plot or story,more like random thoughts.but i like this kind of drops,like to write like this when i'm bored,but the downside is that people do not pay that much attention to this kind of drops,as they give to other lamer drops.the structure was good,flowed nicely,vocab ok...overall a fine read.keep droping man.

    and if ya have the time,please drop a feed in "Writings of an Immortal soul" in my sig.would be much apreciated

    anyway uppin for ya
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    Just one response, fuckers?

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    nice man, liked it alot
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    well written, the way you opened was nice, this was a good enough piece to keep my attention to the end. Throwing in the Simpson/Goldman thing was filler'ish, but you took care of that well enough with the setup, the bigfoot thing was maybe a little abstract in a way, which made it ok... all around, I liked the end product.

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    this was really good born. witty from the 1st line to the last, and the writing was done well. i liked this whole verse man, not much else.

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    This is another dope verse from you i aint read a poor effort by you yet.
    The concept was good and you got deep on the issues you was talking about, the hoffa line was dope and the goldman killing line your imagery and vocab always make your verses stand out the flow was ok.

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