Salvation

[>Inertia>]

My friends are beginning to think
I'm wild
drifting from crime to crime
like some homeless child.
My train is hazardous
and hectic
And my hands emit a stench
worse than septic-
from plunging into chests
and removing beating hearts
They want my rampage
to end.
I want my salvation to
start.
Every night I pray to God
eyes lost in the sea
But every morning God's jaws
bite into me.
Enigmas encompass my
soul
And my feet are searing hot
from standing in
this deep hole.
This heresy damns me
charging me with pain
So I spread my wings and
fly from this bridge
..let myself be caught
by God's hand.

[chuck taylor.]

damn.. another peace i liked from you man, wasent AS tight as the last peace i red from you.. but still tight non the less.. i particully like your rapping style aswell.. short but hard, and ill lines..
tight shit..

u would make a good audio head

show me more!

[>Inertia>]

peep this as well, please.

[Him]

The style was different then some of the others that I have read from you but this was a nice poem.

[Mesmerize]

This was a pretty good peice mac but i wasnt feeling it as much as some of the others i read. However I do really like how you ended it. I thought it was just a little plain i guess (lacking emotion). I thought maybe you couldve got more creative with this. But its definately not bad at all, like i said i personally just wasnt feeling this one. Keep at it though. Your a dope poet.

peace,
Mez