Inside

[Truth.]

Inside

Fake friends lose ends unperishable feelings ahead
So many thoughts on perspectives racing in my head
Telling me different conclusions on where to prevail
My ships in a dark and stormy sea but I must set sail
Towards my hypothisis in life an prove if you do try
You won't die a failure because your spirit survived
I'm sitting here alone an I hear nothing but whispers
Touching my skin piercing my tears cause I miss her
But love is something that's over rated to ones heart
For it isn't what fails you it's your mind that departs
An makes you feel what you feel inside turning knots
Remember everyday is another self made building block
Pain does stop an tears do rot an your cheek or wherever
Gone doesn't mean the memeries aren't there forever
Inside me I know this but still I challenge my emotions
Tear vs thought an it creates me to believe this notion
Winners never quit quitters never win i've said it before
That's a sentance that in six words says actually a lot more
People over look danger fialure even certian decisions
It is who you are an your morols that cause collisions
Allow you to break down think about a self homicide
But why? Because you're not feeling like heaven inside?
The population has the population thinking negitive right?
What point do you break away from the population to fight?
Or show that one person you feel trust towards them?
Cause that perfect oppurunity may not ever come again
I feel alone hated rejected and over looked sometimes
Everybody has a story, a matter if you read between the lines
Jusice sometimes isn't the worst punishment I believe
It's what you sentance yourself to feel inside your dreams
When you're asleep do you actually sleep or just wonder
If you had changed what you did would things be better?
It doesn't matter forget the past you can't touch it again
Change your future you just need to be prepare my friend
I feel, lost, alone, angry, self centered with no desire
I sit in a flame of hope but society an fake friends trap the fire
Regardless of how many tears I cry how alone I feel inside
I know I gotta be greatful for my decisions an that i'm alive

Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...65#post2089565
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=171957

[demolish]

Dat shit is raw as hell.
Keep doin wat u doin cuz its workin.
Nice use of vocab, its very deep, very deep,
dont fall off though, keep up wit da nice work.
Peace

[Andrew..]

Good flow. Nice Multis here and there. Nice Vocabulary. Some emotion in this with a nice story behind it. Keep at it fam.

[Truth.]

Thanks, up

[Th3Truth]

Shit is hott, real deep.. keep your game up boy husslle harder...i thought it flowed well.. my favorite lines besides the ones stretched out on the glass table..."Winners never quit quitters never win i've said it before
That's a sentance that in six words says actually a lot more"
i like that line the best cuz i can relate to that you kno cuz i think you gotta give it your all if your gona succeed you kno you cant give up.. real talk mien ill holla

[Truth.]

Thanks, i'll reply to others as well

[CrazyCarl]

I liked the flow, thought you did a good job of filling up the lines. You had emotion in the verse, and you kept to the subject mostly. You had good concepts and you worded them well.
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=172439

[Expo.]

Yeah, this was definitely good.. Nice ish'. You could enhance your flow with multis though. Good content and I liked the approach you took with this. Nice imagery too.. keep it up.

[Truth.]

Thanks up.

[Truth.]

Up.