quick 10 min keystyle..read dis (hot)

[Verbal_Conflict]

Every situation gettin diluted with sik sounded music,
cuz when you ask to battle me, what yah hear is profoundly amusin
all yah cowards refusin to come against a man who gets his lyircs from
Pounds of green stuffed into round lookin cubans.
Once im done with you, after we went a round not 2,
knock-outs in 6 bars will leave anyone scared to lift they own sound in a room
I burn paper to ashes cuz there's always a fire to feed,
no erasers im after my writin skillz always reveal the desires in me,
but whats your own desire you see? One made me pick up a mic a begin fights with frees. dont even despite me "PLZ" this industry got mad talent
and think it would like my steez.

[F.A.M.]

i liked that shit..i think that the bars were a lil bit to long for my taste but the content was cool,i li8ke leaveinem scared to lift they own sound in a room...haha this worked for me make it a lil longer...aight

[Verbal_Conflict]

thx...uppin for more feed.
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[Mistral]

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

[IwIlLmErKyOu]

alright, this wasnt too bad. it seemed to have some decent punches, and alright flow. but, your bars ran a little too long and could have been better structured. but just keep working on it and you'll get better. peace

[LaYZ]

its good jus looks like you thinkin of shit without thinkin twice .. execpt for that it was good for a quick verse